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=== Eranon ===
 
  
Eranon listens, his heart going out to this one he should call enemy, he nods and listens.  As she speaks of her thoughts on the relationship between The Sun-Eater and the Great Lady, his eyes narrow, deep inside a flicker of flame burns.
 
 
'''"Loving her???  M'lady, with all respect, you cannot hear the giver of life cry in pain as I do.  Her sobs ring in my ears, and rend my very spirit to hear her scream as she is ravaged.  Your Water's Taint does not love her.  Love is give as well as take.  This relationship is all take, and without permission.  He means to leave her a scarred husk."'''
 
 
Eranon calms after his outburst, regaining himself.
 
 
'''"I am sorry, I do not mean to throw my ire on you.  And no, to my knowledge, no one cries for your blood, as long as you remain friend.  I will do my very best to see to this.  You have no allies under the Lightbane, this I understand.  I only ask you because I wish to make sure of your true desire to help us.  You do understand that our goal, as I have just revealed my self in my emotion, is to counter that of your lord, correct?  Our plan against Fallport is to directly opose your lord.  I have trouble seeing how you can stay with us knowing this.  I want to make sure that you will not turn on us at some crucial point.  I do not see you as enemy, Lady Ahemia, but our goals seem very different."'''
 
 
'''"Please, tell the others of this information, they will understand it better than I, and  this will go far in gaining their trust."'''
 
 
'''"Finally, you ask me why I helped you, I will tell you truly.  When I destroyed the shadow-spirit granted to you, I was acting in self-interest.  I will suffer no spy in my domain, inasmuch as it is my ability to do so.  When I returned your Dahiran to you, I acted more of compassion to him as a child of Aryth than for you.  However, you then said that we are not enemies, and as such, you are under my protection.  This is why I wanted to help you escape the Vangard.  I wish no ill for you, so long as you are not enemy, but I wanted to take this time to be sure that we are well understood by one another.  I beleive I have convinced the others that there is no profit in your death, and you should be allowed to leave if you so desire."'''
 
 
Eranon looks her over for a moment.
 
 
'''"However, I am afraid that things may have changed, now with what has taken root in you.  If the child is human, as you say, I will advocate for the child.  I beleive no judgement shall be passed before one is given the chance to prove their actions for good or ill."'''
 
  
  

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