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"You're looking remarkably well this morning. The way I heard it, you drank several burly men under the table yesterday." Jian Wei manages to burden this relatively innocuous sentence with enough disapproval to make any teetotaler proud. We walk through the busy streets of town, to my offices in the Cinnabar district. It's been a while since I rode south, and found the most exciting post ever, and while I'm back in town, I want to see how business has been in my absence.
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"You're looking remarkably well this morning. The way I heard it, you drank several burly men under the table yesterday." Jheros manages to burden this relatively innocuous sentence with enough disapproval to make any teetotaler proud. We walk through the busy streets of town, to my offices in the Cinnabar district. Because of the hidden nature of the manse, I conduct most of my dealings with the outside world from here. It's been a while since I rode south, and found the most exciting post ever, and while I'm back in town, I want to see how business has been in my absence.
  
"Look, I know you don't believe me, but it was necessary. Do you know anything about that crazy death cultist that shows up in town sometimes?" Jian Wei is exactly the kind of person to know something like this. He keeps his ear to the ground, and he hears all kinds of things that people won't tell me.
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"Look, I know you don't believe me, but it was necessary. Do you know anything about that crazy death cultist that shows up in town sometimes?" Jheros is exactly the kind of person to know something like this. He keeps his ear to the ground, and he hears all kinds of things that people won't tell me.
  
 
He walks beside me quietly, considering, or perhaps just uncomfortable discussing death cultists in the middle of a busy thoroughfare. We arrive at the inauspicious storefront that houses my ambitions lately, and he ushers me inside, glancing both ways before coming inside himself and shutting the door firmly.
 
He walks beside me quietly, considering, or perhaps just uncomfortable discussing death cultists in the middle of a busy thoroughfare. We arrive at the inauspicious storefront that houses my ambitions lately, and he ushers me inside, glancing both ways before coming inside himself and shutting the door firmly.
  
"Why are you being so needlessly mysterious? We're hardly the only ones talking about ol' what's his name." I really don’t understand why all of my conversations with Jian Wei seem to be so ominous.
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"Why are you being so needlessly mysterious? We're hardly the only ones talking about ol' what's his name." I really don’t understand why all of my conversations with Jheros seem to be so ominous.
  
 
"That's exactly what I'm worried about.” He began. “I don't want to concern you, but there's something decidedly unnatural about this. Two days ago, the apostate has a healthy following, and today he's universally hated? I've been watching him, he's- well, he was one of the more interesting people in Nexus. But people that followed him yesterday are burning their black robes this morning. Wait. I can tell by your face that you know something. And before I forget, what does this have to do with the excesses of last night?"
 
"That's exactly what I'm worried about.” He began. “I don't want to concern you, but there's something decidedly unnatural about this. Two days ago, the apostate has a healthy following, and today he's universally hated? I've been watching him, he's- well, he was one of the more interesting people in Nexus. But people that followed him yesterday are burning their black robes this morning. Wait. I can tell by your face that you know something. And before I forget, what does this have to do with the excesses of last night?"
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"Um...'Nexus is awesome, let's all get drunk!'? It seemed a good idea at the time, as it got innocent bystanders out of the way. Just remember: Liquor saves lives." I said, very seriously. “You seem unconvinced."
 
"Um...'Nexus is awesome, let's all get drunk!'? It seemed a good idea at the time, as it got innocent bystanders out of the way. Just remember: Liquor saves lives." I said, very seriously. “You seem unconvinced."
  
"You’re telling me that late night revelry saved the peasants of Nexus? I’m not buying it. Actually, I had no idea you were that kind of girl." Only Jian Wei could say this without even a trace of flirtation.
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"You’re telling me that late night revelry saved the peasants of Nexus? I’m not buying it. Actually, I had no idea you were that kind of girl." Only Jheros could say this without even a trace of flirtation.
  
"Look, I needed a drink by then.” I replied. “I mean, why was the apostate even here yesterday? I shouldn't really let things like that happen in my town. Luckily one of my circle has the resolve to do what I never have thought to."
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"Look, I needed a drink by then.” I replied. “I mean, why was the apostate even here yesterday? I shouldn't really let things like that happen in my town. Luckily one of my circle has the resolve to do what I never bothered to."
  
 
"It's Nexus. What do you expect?" he shrugged.
 
"It's Nexus. What do you expect?" he shrugged.
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"Nexus is a crossroads of civilization.” I continued. “What if that brought together the best parts of every culture, instead of just the worst things? This city has something that no other place has. Think of it. Nexus is shadowed by the image of what it could be. This town could shine like a diamond. Hmmm…."
 
"Nexus is a crossroads of civilization.” I continued. “What if that brought together the best parts of every culture, instead of just the worst things? This city has something that no other place has. Think of it. Nexus is shadowed by the image of what it could be. This town could shine like a diamond. Hmmm…."
  
“Oh, gods no.” Jian Wei sighed. “You’ve got an idea.”  
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“Oh, gods no.” Jheros sighed. “You’ve got an idea.”  
  
  
 
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