Editing Pathfinder 2 Surviving the Apocalypse:Corinna Ironheart

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Corinna walked to the small kitchen, put her bow away and the hare on the table. Her father did not follow her. But as she was washing her hands before starting to work on her catch, her brothers walked in.
 
Corinna walked to the small kitchen, put her bow away and the hare on the table. Her father did not follow her. But as she was washing her hands before starting to work on her catch, her brothers walked in.
  
“You hurt father, talking to him like that!” Cory said. “After all he has done for us!”
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“You hurt father, talking to her like that!” Cory said. “After all he has done for us!”
  
 
“And father is too gentle to hurt you back,” Corwin said, and then stepped menacingly close to her. “But we are not!”
 
“And father is too gentle to hurt you back,” Corwin said, and then stepped menacingly close to her. “But we are not!”

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