Editing Philippe-AoS

Jump to: navigation, search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision Your text
Line 21: Line 21:
 
He looked at us as if we were table-scrapes.  He shook his head, took our wine, and left.  
 
He looked at us as if we were table-scrapes.  He shook his head, took our wine, and left.  
  
βˆ’
In the family we grew up among you and I were often disregarded.  I had been in Amber for less then a year.  I had been introduced to the others but had barely spoke to any of them.  They seemed only interested in teasing you.  I spent some time with Flora for a few weeks.  I went on a hunting trip with Julian who decided I was hopeless on a horse. I spent a month on one of Gerard's training ships trying to learn the ways of the sail navy.  I was unceremoniously dropped off in the Harbor district after I nearly hung myself in ship's rigging and couldn't manage my seasickness.   
+
In the family we grew up among you and I were often disregarded.  I had been in Amber for less then a year.  I had been introduced to the others but had barely spoke to any of them.  They seemed only interested in teasing you.  I spent some time with Flora for a few weeks.  I went on a hunting trip with Julian who decided I was hopeless on a horse. I spent a month on one of Gerard's training ships trying to learn the ways of the sail navy.  I was unceremoniously dropped off in the Harbor district after I nearly hung myself and couldn't manage my seasickness.   
  
 
I had spent a year in shadow with Benedict learning weapon skills and he said I was a prodigy with the bow. He sent me to his private hell school called Nasty Place but while I passed the course I was near the bottom of the class.  Much of what kept me alive in the centuries I traveled shadow I learned under the tutelage of Benedict's tender mercies but after it was over and I was acknowledged in Amber he rarely ever spoke to me.   
 
I had spent a year in shadow with Benedict learning weapon skills and he said I was a prodigy with the bow. He sent me to his private hell school called Nasty Place but while I passed the course I was near the bottom of the class.  Much of what kept me alive in the centuries I traveled shadow I learned under the tutelage of Benedict's tender mercies but after it was over and I was acknowledged in Amber he rarely ever spoke to me.   

Please note that all contributions to RPGnet may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource (see RPGnet:Copyrights for details). Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)