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'''EXT. TATOOINE - WASTELAND
 
'''EXT. TATOOINE - WASTELAND
  
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'''The Landspeeder with Luke, R2, Threepio, and Ben in it zooms across the desert. The speeder stops on a bluff overlooking the spaceport at Mos Eisley. It is a haphazard array of low, gray, concrete structures and semi-domes.  A harsh gale blows across the stark canyon floor.  Luke adjusts his goggles and walks to the edge of the craggy bluff where Ben is standing.
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'''The Landspeeder with Luke, Artoo, Threepio, and Ben in it zooms across the desert. The speeder stops on a bluff overlooking the spaceport at Mos Eisley. It is a haphazard array of low, gray, concrete structures and semi-domes.  A harsh gale blows across the stark canyon floor.  Luke adjusts his goggles and walks to the edge of the craggy bluff where Ben is standing.
  
 
'''BEN
 
'''BEN

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