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[[Image:Prince-Resplendent.jpg|frame]]A dark miasma rolled after the army as it marched in formation down the crumbling stone road to the spectral kingdom of Hanau.  The rank and file were common ghosts, bearing the half-remembered swords their descendants had buried alongside their corpses, but their commanders were the Nemissaries.  Powerful ghosts skilled in war and Essence use, each Nemissary had mastered the arts of the Nine Terrors Visage and the Ghost-Devil Form; their scaly flesh exploded into boils, their arms segmented at the elbows to reveal two clawed hands a piece, their mouths gaped as wide as the void.  While the common ghosts maintained a semblance of their living selves, none would have thought the Nemissaries had ever been human.   
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A dark miasma rolled after the army as it marched in formation down the crumbling stone road to the spectral kingdom of Hanau.  The rank and file were common ghosts, bearing the half-remembered swords their descendants had buried alongside their corpses, but their commanders were the Nemissaries.  Powerful ghosts skilled in war and Essence use, each Nemissary had mastered the arts of the Nine Terrors Visage and the Ghost-Devil Form; their scaly flesh exploded into boils, their arms segmented at the elbows to reveal two clawed hands a piece, their mouths gaped as wide as the void.  While the common ghosts maintained a semblance of their living selves, none would have thought the Nemissaries had ever been human.   
  
 
Ahead of the Nemissaries marched a full scale of jade effigies.  Seven feet tall and carved of solid white jade, each of the ponderous warriors weilded a terrible sword and a blank expression on features worn smooth by the passage of time.  Though not the quickest to react, the jade effigies were durable enough to make a solid vanguard for the army of death.
 
Ahead of the Nemissaries marched a full scale of jade effigies.  Seven feet tall and carved of solid white jade, each of the ponderous warriors weilded a terrible sword and a blank expression on features worn smooth by the passage of time.  Though not the quickest to react, the jade effigies were durable enough to make a solid vanguard for the army of death.

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