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"But worry not," he said brightly and sheathed his knife, "we share a common cause.  And more than that, I think."  With that, the mark of the Night caste glimmered to life on Ghost Wing's brow, glowing softly with a white and purple radiance.</i>
 
"But worry not," he said brightly and sheathed his knife, "we share a common cause.  And more than that, I think."  With that, the mark of the Night caste glimmered to life on Ghost Wing's brow, glowing softly with a white and purple radiance.</i>
  
Copper Jaguar’s smile broadened into one of genuine pleasure as he clasped the younger man’s forearm in friendship. The Nexian had impressed him with his courage, for fear was the mark of prey, not the predator. “Welcome, brother, and well met!”  The Zenith threw back his head as laughter shook his frame.  “I am Copper Jaguar, former brigand of Ardeleth and chosen priest of the Unconquered Sun.  It was he who bade me travel south to these Hundred Kingdoms in search of my brethren - blessed be his name!”  
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Copper Jaguar’s smile widened into one of genuine pleasure as he reached out to clasp the younger man’s forearm in friendship. The Nexian had impressed him with his courage, for fear was the mark of prey, not the predator. “Welcome, brother, and well met!”  The Zenith threw back his head as laughter shook his frame.  “I am Copper Jaguar, former brigand of Ardeleth and chosen priest of the Unconquered Sun.  It was he who bade me travel south to these Hundred Kingdoms in search of my brethren - blessed be his name!”  
  
 
“Indeed<i>... brother</i>,” replied Little Ghost Wing, his smile <s>returning</s> <i>widening</i> in light of the Ardelethian’s obvious pleasure. “Now, we only need find a way to deal with this army which complicates our visit with <s>the</s> Lord Mithric.” He turned to face Copper Jaguar.  “Would you like the thousand on the left or the thousand on the right?”
 
“Indeed<i>... brother</i>,” replied Little Ghost Wing, his smile <s>returning</s> <i>widening</i> in light of the Ardelethian’s obvious pleasure. “Now, we only need find a way to deal with this army which complicates our visit with <s>the</s> Lord Mithric.” He turned to face Copper Jaguar.  “Would you like the thousand on the left or the thousand on the right?”

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