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It was one of these who first noticed the man who strode forth from the darkening forest – a powerfully built man who walked with the confidence of one born to rule. As he strode into the firelight, many noticed the elaborate golden blade which he bore in his hand, a blade which matched the brand of the Anathema blazing bright upon his brow.
 
It was one of these who first noticed the man who strode forth from the darkening forest – a powerfully built man who walked with the confidence of one born to rule. As he strode into the firelight, many noticed the elaborate golden blade which he bore in his hand, a blade which matched the brand of the Anathema blazing bright upon his brow.
  
The Zenith’s deep voice rang out across the clearing.  “I am Copper Jaguar, son of fallen Ardeleth and Chosen of the Unconquered Sun.  Many decry both myself and my kind as demons, among them the Lord Johr.  Were this so, your bodies would lie before me now, so defiled that your souls would never know peace.” He passed a stern gaze around at those within the firelight. “But let me assure you – should you attack me, I shall be your end.  Deliver this message to your Lord - tell him to abandon this war.  For otherwise, I swear to you, death comes with the rising of the sun!”
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The Zenith’s deep voice rang out across the clearing.  “I am Copper Jaguar, son of fallen Ardeleth and Chosen of the Unconquered Sun.  Many decry me and my kind as demons, among them the Lord Johr.  Were this so, your bodies would lie before me now, so defiled that your souls would never know peace.” He passed a stern gaze around at those within the firelight. “But let me assure you – should you attack me, I shall be your end.  Deliver this message to your Lord - tell him to abandon this war.  For otherwise, I swear to you, death comes with the rising of the sun!”
  
 
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