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Little Ghost Wing stepped forward from the shadows and into the light provided by the flaring of the Zenith’s white-gold anima.  “They’ll be coming soon,” the Night Caste reminded him.
 
Little Ghost Wing stepped forward from the shadows and into the light provided by the flaring of the Zenith’s white-gold anima.  “They’ll be coming soon,” the Night Caste reminded him.
  
“Yes, they will,” responded the Ardelethian, striking out for the hilltop where his horse was tethered, the fallen Seftarian warriors burning to ash behind him. “My anima will draw the attention of both the Seftarians and the Aelysians.  Johr will pull back into a more defensible posture out of fear of further attack, while Mithric will draw courage from the fact that another of his kind has come to his aid.  Perhaps he will be able to take some sort of advantage from the disruption we have caused.”
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“Yes, they will,” responded the Ardelethian, striking out for the hilltop where his horse was tethered. “My anima will draw the attention of both the Seftarians and the Aelysians.  Johr will pull back into a more defensible posture out of fear of further attack, while Mithric will draw courage from the fact that another of his kind has come to his aid.  Perhaps he will be able to take some sort of advantage from the disruption we have caused.”
  
 
Copper Jaguar swung up into his saddle, and then reached down to pull the Nexian up behind him. “Now, if I am correct, Johr will be very particular of whom he sends in pursuit.  Infantry will not be able to overcome a horseman with a lead start. Cavalry will be slow going due to the darkness, a problem we do not share!”
 
Copper Jaguar swung up into his saddle, and then reached down to pull the Nexian up behind him. “Now, if I am correct, Johr will be very particular of whom he sends in pursuit.  Infantry will not be able to overcome a horseman with a lead start. Cavalry will be slow going due to the darkness, a problem we do not share!”

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