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“But brother!!” Hargan blustered, but Anikous stopped him.
 
“But brother!!” Hargan blustered, but Anikous stopped him.
  
“I would have loved nothing more than for us to sing our song at each others side in battle, but there are larger things right now than an honorable death.  I need your hammer to defend this message.  Get to the Bull.  Take Stumpy and tell him everything.  Once you do that, guard the western flank, for someone coming that direction will have killed one that stood beside me.”  Had not every Northman been born with his tears frozen inside him, they might have been shed at that moment.  But the North makes men hard, and these are the hardest among them.  They clapped each other on the shoulders and gave a warriors embrace.  Within moments they were riding out of sight.  None of the men and women looked back, for the killing was ahead.
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“I would have loved nothing more than for us to sing our song at each others side in battle, but there are larger things right now than an honorable death.  I need your hammer to defend this message.  Get to the Bull.  Take Stumpy and tell him everything.  Once you do that, guard the western flank, for someone coming that direction will have killed a someone that stood beside me.”  Had not every Northman been born with his tears frozen inside him, they might have been shed at that moment.  But the North makes men hard, and these are the hardest among them.  They clapped each other on the shoulders and gave a warriors embrace.  Within moments they were riding out of sight.  None of the men and women looked back, for the killing was ahead.
  
 
Shortly after midday, the barbarian army had come within sight of the mouth of the pass.  They veered slightly northeast, for Stumpy said Tanna had been able, with her keen eyesight, to find another way through the mountains.  It was not a path a mounted army could have taken, but the Northmen weren’t going to use the horses anyway.  They nimbly climbed the treacherous slope, and once the reached the top of the steep ridge, dust could be seen on the horizon.
 
Shortly after midday, the barbarian army had come within sight of the mouth of the pass.  They veered slightly northeast, for Stumpy said Tanna had been able, with her keen eyesight, to find another way through the mountains.  It was not a path a mounted army could have taken, but the Northmen weren’t going to use the horses anyway.  They nimbly climbed the treacherous slope, and once the reached the top of the steep ridge, dust could be seen on the horizon.

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