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        “…self-defense,” the man continued.  The senior cop listened and I watched the other cops with him.  By their body language, I could tell my uncle was a respected member of the community—such as it was—and the cops had dealt with him before.  I caught the main points of the story he spun for the law:  fifth daughter of poor relations on the Rim, middling grades in school, hard worker, he had a position in his offices waiting for me, this regrettable incident wouldn’t happen again, so very sorry to take up their time…
 
        “…self-defense,” the man continued.  The senior cop listened and I watched the other cops with him.  By their body language, I could tell my uncle was a respected member of the community—such as it was—and the cops had dealt with him before.  I caught the main points of the story he spun for the law:  fifth daughter of poor relations on the Rim, middling grades in school, hard worker, he had a position in his offices waiting for me, this regrettable incident wouldn’t happen again, so very sorry to take up their time…
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;All the while he was backing away through the crowd, taking me with him.  By the time we’d gained free of the onlookers, our heels were against the steps leading up to his office.
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;All the while he was backing away through the crowd, taking me with him.  By the time we’d gained free of the onlookers, our heels were against the steps leading up to his office.
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“So, as you can see, gentleman, it was merely horrible misunderstanding.”
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“So, as you can see, gentleman, it was merely horrible misunderstanding.”
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The cops sent the crowd on their way and took up their interrupted beat.
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The cops sent the crowd on their way and took up their interrupted beat.
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''“Spasiba,”'' I said once they were out of earshot. “Thank you.”
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;nbsp;''“Spasiba,”'' I said once they were out of earshot. “Thank you.”
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''“Pazhahl’sta,”'' he replied.  “It was least I could do for my brother’s wife’s sister’s daughter.  Although I feel strange addressing niece without name.”
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''“Pazhahl’sta,”'' he replied.  “It was least I could do for my brother’s wife’s sister’s daughter.  Although I feel strange addressing niece without name.”

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