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behind him walked a woman dressed like a babushka in black, her head
 
behind him walked a woman dressed like a babushka in black, her head
 
wrapped in a scarf; her face was that of a kindly grandmother, her body
 
wrapped in a scarf; her face was that of a kindly grandmother, her body
that of a tractor puller. "Adelai!" she called sharply as  she whapped him in the back of the head with her purse. Niska seemed
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that of a tractor puller. "Adelai!" she called sharply. Niska seemed
 
to shrink a bit and stepped back. The woman introduced herself as
 
to shrink a bit and stepped back. The woman introduced herself as
 
Alexandra Niskova, Adelai Niska's wife.</p>
 
Alexandra Niskova, Adelai Niska's wife.</p>
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<p>Mrs. Niskova and her thugs left Mal and his crew to discuss the offer;
 
<p>Mrs. Niskova and her thugs left Mal and his crew to discuss the offer;
they decided to take the job. They obtained stun weapons -- molecularly imprinted sonic rifles -- from their old
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they decided to take the job. They obtained stun weapons from their old
 
friend Badger, covered by an expense account from Mrs. Niskova. After a
 
friend Badger, covered by an expense account from Mrs. Niskova. After a
 
discussion of various wild schemes to rob the cruiser, they decided to
 
discussion of various wild schemes to rob the cruiser, they decided to

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