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− | ::Gunslinger taps a few more keys on the keyboard. Information pops up on the screen for the relocated Victoria and Chester | + | ::Gunslinger taps a few more keys on the keyboard. Information pops up on the screen for the relocated Victoria and Chester Bullit, now Angela and Jeff Spitz. A photo (clearly recent) of little Jeff Spitz fills in pixel-line by pixel line. Gunslinger takes a sharp, surprised little breath. Jeff is wrestling a golden retriever. He's lost one of his baby teeth, front and center. |
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:::JOEL: Oh ... well ... that's good. | :::JOEL: Oh ... well ... that's good. | ||
− | :::JOE: Yes, Joel, that's good. | + | :::JOE: Yes, Joel, that's good. |
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Finished off the gaps. BlackSheep, you were talking about Gunslinger escaping ... is there a reason (something I've forgotten) why he ''should'' escape? | Finished off the gaps. BlackSheep, you were talking about Gunslinger escaping ... is there a reason (something I've forgotten) why he ''should'' escape? | ||
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