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For an hour, his prayer rang even above the roar of the storm.  Lightning shot down from the sky and scorched arcane patterns into the grass around the stone altar.  His face soaked, Nine Eagle watched the sky and the four burning trees.  His throat was raw and bleeding, but still he gave voice to his call.  Finally, in the moment the furious rain forced the tree-fires to gutter their last, a roar of thunder drowned out Nine Eagle's voice and in the sky a Storm Serpent was born.
 
For an hour, his prayer rang even above the roar of the storm.  Lightning shot down from the sky and scorched arcane patterns into the grass around the stone altar.  His face soaked, Nine Eagle watched the sky and the four burning trees.  His throat was raw and bleeding, but still he gave voice to his call.  Finally, in the moment the furious rain forced the tree-fires to gutter their last, a roar of thunder drowned out Nine Eagle's voice and in the sky a Storm Serpent was born.
  
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The shaman moved quickly; as the Serpent raced down from the sky, Nine Eagle went to each of the beastmen in turn and slit their throats with a flint knife.  They sagged against the warriors who held them, their blood spilling out upon the altar.  But still the Storm Serpent raged closer; the warriors let go of their dying captives and set their spears against the charge.  From beyond the veil of life, Three Wing Seer spoke to his heir.  "It will not be enough.  He needs more."   
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The shaman moved quickly; as the Serpent raced down from the sky, Nine Eagle went to each of the beastmen in turn and slit their throats with a flint knife.  The sagged against the warriors who held them, their blood spilling out upon the altar.  But still the Storm Serpent raged closer; the warriors let go of their dying captives and set their spears against the charge.  From beyond the veil of life, Three Wing Seer spoke to his heir.  "It will not be enough.  He needs more."   
  
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In the center of the altar, Nine Eagle raised the knife to his own throat.  His shade would see if he had met with success.
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In the center of the altar, Nine Eagle nodded and raised the knife to his own throat.  His shade would see if he had met with success.
  
  
 
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[[Heaven's Mandate]]
 
[[Heaven's Mandate]]

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