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"Understand that my lord, honor be upon him, is not to blame for what happened.  The Lawgivers were proud in their glory and would brook no interference in their affairs, even from one of their own.  And my lord's heart, may it ever be praised, had grown so big by then; I once saw him throw a man to the side rather than see him trod upon a flower, and then weep for days at the sight of that man's artlessly broken neck.  Can you imagine how much worse it was when he saw the Twilights twist a man's bones into starlight, the man screaming in pain all the while?  A city fell, that day.  
 
"Understand that my lord, honor be upon him, is not to blame for what happened.  The Lawgivers were proud in their glory and would brook no interference in their affairs, even from one of their own.  And my lord's heart, may it ever be praised, had grown so big by then; I once saw him throw a man to the side rather than see him trod upon a flower, and then weep for days at the sight of that man's artlessly broken neck.  Can you imagine how much worse it was when he saw the Twilights twist a man's bones into starlight, the man screaming in pain all the while?  A city fell, that day.  
  
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"So they came for him, in all their glory and rage, and my master, peace be his prize, could not steel his heart enough to cut his brothers down.  When he was no more they built for him a far-off tomb, they sealed away [[Third-Arm Glaive|his great spear]], stinging be its strikes, they tore apart his servants and erased the memory of his name.  I alone they overlooked, as is a seneschal's lot.   
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"So they came for him, in all their glory and rage, and my master, peace be his prize, could not steel his heart enough to cut his brothers down.  When he was no more they built for him a far-off tomb, they sealed away his spear, they tore apart his servants and erased the memory of his name.  I alone they overlooked, as is a seneschal's lot.   
  
 
"His Essence returned, of course.  Right into the heart of the Usurpation.  He died before I could seek him out; he was again but new to his power and never really stood a chance.  I will miss him, for he was kind to me, but I do not think I will ever see him again."
 
"His Essence returned, of course.  Right into the heart of the Usurpation.  He died before I could seek him out; he was again but new to his power and never really stood a chance.  I will miss him, for he was kind to me, but I do not think I will ever see him again."

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