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The jewel of the system, Orgicus is of immense value to the rest of the sub-sector due to its bountiful harvests.  Combined with careful long-term planning and polished efficiency, it can itself easily feed the population of the rest of the sub-sector.  At present, without sufficient transportation capability, much of each year's harvest is thrown out or seized by the pirates that plague the system.  There are few chartist captains currently willing to transport goods to and from Orgicus - and if this situation is not remedied soon, then the starvation faced on Exaviar's World and other planets may reach devastating proportions.
 
The jewel of the system, Orgicus is of immense value to the rest of the sub-sector due to its bountiful harvests.  Combined with careful long-term planning and polished efficiency, it can itself easily feed the population of the rest of the sub-sector.  At present, without sufficient transportation capability, much of each year's harvest is thrown out or seized by the pirates that plague the system.  There are few chartist captains currently willing to transport goods to and from Orgicus - and if this situation is not remedied soon, then the starvation faced on Exaviar's World and other planets may reach devastating proportions.
  
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The pirates were once led by the turncoat frigate ''Good Omen'', a vassal vessel of House Viaticus.  Since its capture by the new Lord-Captain of the ''Aetherius Aeternus'', it is unknown what vessel, if any, has taken its place.
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The pirates were once led by the turncoat frigate ''Good Omen'', which was once a vassal vessel of House Viaticus.  Since its capture by the new Lord-Captain of the ''Aetherius Aeternus'', it is unknown what vessel, if any, has taken its place.
  
 
==Famul System==
 
==Famul System==

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