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Desire, a hunger so savage that all her nerves had balled to one spot, his lips not enough to satiate her or his arms around her enough to satisfy her as they had done before.  If she could have drawn him within in her, shaft, tongue, hands, she would have, anything to keep that cascade of pleasure coming from his groin into her body.  She could not touch enough of him, devour enough of him to overcome the call of his manhood within her, nothing but that fullness pulsing and driving within her.  Waves of pleasure so strong that they were close to pain made her cry out and groan, her breath coming short and precious as her body contracted to that one thing.  He would have wounds from her nails, she knew, but she could not find the air to beg his forgiveness; her own body was aching by the strength with which he clasped her to him and her lips were bruised by the intensity with which they both sought each other.   
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Desire, a hunger so savage that all her nerves had balled to one spot, his lips not enough to satiate her or his arms around her enough to satisfy her as they had done before.  If she could have drawn him within in her, shaft, tongue, hands, she would have, anything to keep that cascade of pleasure coming from his groin into her body.  She could not touch enough of him, devour enough of him to overcome the primal call of his manhood within her, nothing but that fullness pulsing and driving within her.  Waves of pleasure so strong that they were close to pain made her cry out and groan, her breath coming short and precious as her body contracted to that one thing.  He would have wounds from her nails, she knew, but she could not find the air to beg his forgiveness; her own body was aching by the strength with which he clasped her to him and her lips were bruised by the intensity with which they both sought each other.   
  
  
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Abruptly, there was a twisting inside her, a release so mighty that she cried out as her insides pulsed and throbbed with an intensity that they had never before achieved.  She groaned as the contractions swept over her, grit her teeth against its power as her eyes rolled back into her head and she arched against him, pushing against him and the bed as she nearly wept with the savage relief that she felt at the cascading orgasms of joy that swept through her.  It was a release so powerful that she could only laugh, savoring the feeling as it swallowed her and drowned her every sense to darkness.
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Abruptly, there was a twisting inside her, a contraction so mighty that she cried out as her insides pulsed and throbbed with an intensity that they had never before achieved.  It was primal and she groaned as the contractions swept over her, grit her teeth against its power as her eyes rolled back into her head and she arched against him, pushing against him and the bed as she nearly wept with the savage relief that she felt at the cascade of orgasmic joy that swept through her.  It was a release so powerful that she could only laugh, savoring the feeling as it swallowed her and drowned her every sense to darkness.
 
   
 
   
  

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