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''You think of Evie'', he thought.  ''My thoughts of you are not different.  What I wish to DO differs greatly, but as you wish to create possibilities for Evie equal to her suffering, so I wish to give to you''.<br><br>
 
''You think of Evie'', he thought.  ''My thoughts of you are not different.  What I wish to DO differs greatly, but as you wish to create possibilities for Evie equal to her suffering, so I wish to give to you''.<br><br>
 
        
 
        
''You have been hurt, and lack trust'', he thought, willing his imaginings into her head. ''I would protect you if only you would let me''.<br><br>
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''You have been hurt, and lack trust, he thought, willing his imaginings into her head.   I would protect you if only you would let me''.<br><br>
 
      
 
      
 
As the eldritch light faded he swept her up in his arms, cradling her as he carried her to the stairs leading to the ostentatious rooms below.  The chill of the night air turned his skin to gooseflesh, but the touch of her hands around his neck and her cheek on his shoulder flushed with heat. <br><br>
 
As the eldritch light faded he swept her up in his arms, cradling her as he carried her to the stairs leading to the ostentatious rooms below.  The chill of the night air turned his skin to gooseflesh, but the touch of her hands around his neck and her cheek on his shoulder flushed with heat. <br><br>

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