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Katherine merely smiled. "Mr. Rhys is next, is he not?" she asked charmingly and fluttered her fan. Ezekiel had been swallowed by the crowd, but now she might find him.<br><br>
 
Katherine merely smiled. "Mr. Rhys is next, is he not?" she asked charmingly and fluttered her fan. Ezekiel had been swallowed by the crowd, but now she might find him.<br><br>
  
He was dancing with Ms...Penn, wasn't it? Pretty enough and a fine dancer, but she had the wide watery eyes of a cow. And the intelligence to match, he thought. Then he immediately apologized to the Host for the thought. Just because these women were bound and used to society's call didn't mean they had no value in the eyes of the Host. ''All people with respect, Ezekiel'', he thought to himself. He had Ms. Penn in a pirouette, a few of her blond hairs flying loose from the tight coiffure in the process when he saw Katherine. Dancing with a young dark haired man, she looked as excited as Ezekiel did. That is to say, not at all. Her elaborate green dress was quite flattering though and it was clear she put the rest of the women to shame.<br><br>  
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He was dancing with Ms...Penn, wasn't it? Pretty enough and a fine dancer, but she had the wide watery eyes of a cow. And the intelligence to match, he thought. Then he immediately apologized to the Host for the thought. Just because these women were bound and used to society's call didn't mean they had no value in the eyes of the Host. All people with respect, Ezekiel, he thought to himself. He had Ms. Penn in a pirouette, a few of her blond hairs flying loose from the tight coiffure in the process when he saw Katherine. Dancing with a young dark haired man, she looked as excited as Ezekiel did. That is to say, not at all. Her elaborate green dress was quite flattering though and it was clear she put the rest of the women to shame.<br><br>  
  
 
As the dancers moved across the floor in their spiraling moves to the rhythm of the waltz, he and his partner eventually came close to Katherine and her partner. As their paths crossed, he looked at her, never deviating from the rhythm and subtly rolled his eyes in a clear indicator of exactly what he thought of the whole proceedings. Then they were swept away again as he lead Ms. Penn towards the other side, all the while holding a conversation on how tiresome London's fog was this time of year. It was all he could do to keep from audibly sighing.<br><br>
 
As the dancers moved across the floor in their spiraling moves to the rhythm of the waltz, he and his partner eventually came close to Katherine and her partner. As their paths crossed, he looked at her, never deviating from the rhythm and subtly rolled his eyes in a clear indicator of exactly what he thought of the whole proceedings. Then they were swept away again as he lead Ms. Penn towards the other side, all the while holding a conversation on how tiresome London's fog was this time of year. It was all he could do to keep from audibly sighing.<br><br>
 
   
 
   
When she caught his look, she crinkled her eyes at him and stifled a giggle. Ezekiel was quite a dancer, his slender figure dashing in his formals. Lydia Penn was a lovely girl, lovely with large dewy eyes that were focused on the man who danced with her and they made a fine couple. ''Lydia should be looking away from him for the waltz'', Katherine noted. It was the proper thing to do and besides it would give her the chance to not look as if she were about to swoon in Ezekiel's arms. But the poor girl had the sense of a rock. And Ezekiel by far had been the most handsome man that she had danced with this evening. She smiled bemusedly to herself. Ezekiel was as miserable as she. But at least they would be miserable together, if only for small snatches of time. When the intricate swirls of the dance brought them near again, Katherine mouthed, "Dance soon?" before she was turned away again.<br><br>
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When she caught his look, she crinkled her eyes at him and stifled a giggle. Ezekiel was quite a dancer, his slender figure dashing in his formals. Lydia Penn was a lovely girl, lovely with large dewy eyes that were focused on the man who danced with her and they made a fine couple. Lydia should be looking away from him for the waltz, Katherine noted. It was the proper thing to do and besides it would give her the chance to not look as if she were about to swoon in Ezekiel's arms. But the poor girl had the sense of a rock. And Ezekiel by far had been the most handsome man that she had danced with this evening. She smiled bemusedly to herself. Ezekiel was as miserable as she. But at least they would be miserable together, if only for small snatches of time. When the intricate swirls of the dance brought them near again, Katherine mouthed, "Dance soon?" before she was turned away again.<br><br>
  
 
Ezekiel smiled when she asked him to dance while he was in the middle of a dance with another woman. Her chaperone would be horrified had she heard. Ezekiel, of course, had no intention of telling her. Mrs. Fitzhugh was an unfortunate reminder that eventually Katherine would find someone worthy of her...or at least worthy enough and their friendship would be swept away, lost to the relentless rhythm of the waltz of life. But in the meantime, he could enjoy her company.<br><br>
 
Ezekiel smiled when she asked him to dance while he was in the middle of a dance with another woman. Her chaperone would be horrified had she heard. Ezekiel, of course, had no intention of telling her. Mrs. Fitzhugh was an unfortunate reminder that eventually Katherine would find someone worthy of her...or at least worthy enough and their friendship would be swept away, lost to the relentless rhythm of the waltz of life. But in the meantime, he could enjoy her company.<br><br>
  
He ended up dancing with two more ladies before his name came up on Katherine's dance card. Neither of them was particularly troublesome, but neither was particularly interesting either. And certainly neither had the ''joie de vive'' that Katherine possessed. Were she a man, with her wealth, intelligence, and charm, she would be a force to be reckoned with. Instead, she was forced to be dependent on a man for her future. It saddened him, a little.<br><br>
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He ended up dancing with two more ladies before his name came up on Katherine's dance card. Neither of them was particularly troublesome, but neither was particularly interesting either. And certainly neither had the joie de vive that Katherine possessed. Were she a man, with her wealth, intelligence, and charm, she would be a force to be reckoned with. Instead, she was forced to be dependent on a man for her future. It saddened him, a little.<br><br>
  
 
Finally, his turn arrived and he stood opposite Katherine in the waltz line. He bowed a deep bow and then stepped forward to grab her hand and to place his hand upon her side. And then they were off and Ezekiel had the first true smile of the evening on his face, even as he looked away from Katherine, as was required. "How are you surviving, Ms. Fleming?"<br><br>
 
Finally, his turn arrived and he stood opposite Katherine in the waltz line. He bowed a deep bow and then stepped forward to grab her hand and to place his hand upon her side. And then they were off and Ezekiel had the first true smile of the evening on his face, even as he looked away from Katherine, as was required. "How are you surviving, Ms. Fleming?"<br><br>
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Katherine, as he already knew, was an excellent dancer, and he had to put forth almost no effort to glide across the floor with her, unlike some he had danced with earlier. "So I take it none of the devilishly handsome young men on the floor have caught your eye. Perhaps I should ask if any of them have caught your good butler's eye?"<br><br>
 
Katherine, as he already knew, was an excellent dancer, and he had to put forth almost no effort to glide across the floor with her, unlike some he had danced with earlier. "So I take it none of the devilishly handsome young men on the floor have caught your eye. Perhaps I should ask if any of them have caught your good butler's eye?"<br><br>
 
   
 
   
"I am being ''guided'' towards Mr. Claremont at present. So, Mr. Drake, were you quite smitten with a lovely woman, what could she do that would make you lose interest? Mind you, there cannot be scandal nor can it be too obvious." She looked him in the eyes briefly to assure him that she was serious before casting her gaze demurely outward again.<br><br>
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"I am being guided towards Mr. Claremont at present. So, Mr. Drake, were you quite smitten with a lovely woman, what could she do that would make you lose interest? Mind you, there cannot be scandal nor can it be too obvious." She looked him in the eyes briefly to assure him that she was serious before casting her gaze demurely outward again.<br><br>
  
 
"Well," he said calmly, his voice slipping into a teaching cadence, similar to what Father Francis used during his childhood lessons, "you must always know your opponent before you engage. Different opponents require tactics. For example, if you were to try and discourage me, all you need do is act like her." And he made an intricate step that turned them so Katherine was facing his last dance partner, Ms. Delia Bickham. She had an almost empty look on her admittedly gorgeous face and displayed a large, obviously fake (to Ezekiel's mind) smile. When he had danced with her, there had not been a single original comment or thought to emerge from her lips and she had expected him to fawn all over her. She had been disappointed.<br><br>
 
"Well," he said calmly, his voice slipping into a teaching cadence, similar to what Father Francis used during his childhood lessons, "you must always know your opponent before you engage. Different opponents require tactics. For example, if you were to try and discourage me, all you need do is act like her." And he made an intricate step that turned them so Katherine was facing his last dance partner, Ms. Delia Bickham. She had an almost empty look on her admittedly gorgeous face and displayed a large, obviously fake (to Ezekiel's mind) smile. When he had danced with her, there had not been a single original comment or thought to emerge from her lips and she had expected him to fawn all over her. She had been disappointed.<br><br>
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"We are doomed to repeat," she continued with mirth. "You know, as our society rapidly gains knowledge through science, I think it very important that we find a way to mature ourselves to handle it. We humans are a headstrong and impetuous people and between magic and science is a very narrow road to wisdom. We find new technologies and new magics every month it seems. In the papers, such wonders appear that I have never dreamed of. And yet I believe that we are no more wise than the cavemen that we supposedly evolved from. We need to understand our past to find the clues of how to go forward and not make mistakes with these new toys we create." Her hand found her mouth in horror a moment later. "I don't even know if you believe in this new evolution theory, Mr. Drake. And I have prattled on entirely too much for polite society. Please forgive me." <br><br>
 
"We are doomed to repeat," she continued with mirth. "You know, as our society rapidly gains knowledge through science, I think it very important that we find a way to mature ourselves to handle it. We humans are a headstrong and impetuous people and between magic and science is a very narrow road to wisdom. We find new technologies and new magics every month it seems. In the papers, such wonders appear that I have never dreamed of. And yet I believe that we are no more wise than the cavemen that we supposedly evolved from. We need to understand our past to find the clues of how to go forward and not make mistakes with these new toys we create." Her hand found her mouth in horror a moment later. "I don't even know if you believe in this new evolution theory, Mr. Drake. And I have prattled on entirely too much for polite society. Please forgive me." <br><br>
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He smiled at her. "I am not polite society, Ms. Fleming. And it is wonderful hearing someone else who is familiar with Mr. Darwin's theories. I do not know if I believe them, but he certainly puts forth a compelling argument." As he said it, he reached over and started moving the handle of his cane between the fingers of his right hand. Not really a nervous habit, but more of an unconscious one. Whenever he gave serious thought to something, he found himself with cane in hand, the smooth polished wooden handle sliding between his fingers.<br><br>
 
He smiled at her. "I am not polite society, Ms. Fleming. And it is wonderful hearing someone else who is familiar with Mr. Darwin's theories. I do not know if I believe them, but he certainly puts forth a compelling argument." As he said it, he reached over and started moving the handle of his cane between the fingers of his right hand. Not really a nervous habit, but more of an unconscious one. Whenever he gave serious thought to something, he found himself with cane in hand, the smooth polished wooden handle sliding between his fingers.<br><br>
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"Good night, Mr. Drake," she answered gaily and gave her attention to Mrs. Fitzhugh.<br><br>
 
"Good night, Mr. Drake," she answered gaily and gave her attention to Mrs. Fitzhugh.<br><br>
  
"Mr. Claremont would like another dance, Katherine," the older woman announced and Katherine nodded as the music swelled in readiness for another song. Angling her head, she could just see Mr. Drake being swallowed by the crowd as Mr. Claremont emerged to claim her again. ''If only she could have excluded her company from Mr. Claremont's pleasure'', she thought with irritation as she was swept away. Casting her eyes to the clock, she gave an inner groan. There had to be something beyond this weary world she was born into. Her gaze again sought for Mr. Drake. If only she were a man like he. They would have been capital friends and gone on many an adventure.<br><br>  
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"Mr. Claremont would like another dance, Katherine," the older woman announced and Katherine nodded as the music swelled in readiness for another song. Angling her head, she could just see Mr. Drake being swallowed by the crowd as Mr. Claremont emerged to claim her again. If only she could have excluded her company from Mr. Claremont's pleasure she thought with irritation as she was swept away. Casting her eyes to the clock, she gave an inner groan. There had to be something beyond this weary world she was born into. Her gaze again sought for Mr. Drake. If only she were a man like he. They would have been capital friends and gone on many an adventure.<br><br>  
  
 
And none of them would have been dances. <br><br>
 
And none of them would have been dances. <br><br>

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