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'''Capsule:''' Thor is the thunder god of Norse mythology, prince of Asgard, the land of the gods, and son of the all-powerful Odin. He is the master of the storm and the wind, and a warrior like no other. Thor possesses Mjolnir, a magical hammer of immense power that was a gift of his father and can only be lifted by those that are "worthy".
 
'''Capsule:''' Thor is the thunder god of Norse mythology, prince of Asgard, the land of the gods, and son of the all-powerful Odin. He is the master of the storm and the wind, and a warrior like no other. Thor possesses Mjolnir, a magical hammer of immense power that was a gift of his father and can only be lifted by those that are "worthy".
  
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In modern times Thor was sent to Earth by his father Odin, both to learn humility in the guise of crippled doctor Donald Blake and to protect Earth from evil menaces.
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In modern times, he was sent to Earth by his father Odin, both to learn humility in the guise of crippled doctor Donald Blake and to protect Earth from evil menaces.
  
 
Thor became an important member of Earth's superhuman community and a member of the Avengers, Earth's greatest heroes. Nonetheless most people remain unaware, unbelieving, or uncaring that he really is a Norse God, and not only a human superhero patterned after the being of legend.  
 
Thor became an important member of Earth's superhuman community and a member of the Avengers, Earth's greatest heroes. Nonetheless most people remain unaware, unbelieving, or uncaring that he really is a Norse God, and not only a human superhero patterned after the being of legend.  

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