Editing Those Who Stare In The Black, Game 14: Covert Offers

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'''Allyne:''' (On it.) It's good to hear from you.<br><br>  
 
'''Allyne:''' (On it.) It's good to hear from you.<br><br>  
  
Oksana quickly answers his questions: yes, she's fine; no, she's not sure where she is but it's some distance from the spaceport. The trace shows Oksana's comm signal is getting bounced, making it impossible to triangulate her position. He relays the information and reassures her that he has people looking for her. Before they can make further plans, someone taps on Oksana's door and she tells Stone to keep the channel open. She turns the incoming volume down all the way on her comm and stashes it in the drawer, leaving it open a crack to eavesdrop. <br><br>
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Oksana quickly answers his questions: yes, she's fine; no, she's not sure where she is but it's some distance from the spaceport. The trace shows Oksana's comm signal is getting bounced, making it impossible to triangulate her position. He relays the information and reassures her that he has people looking for her. Before they can make further plans, someone taps on Oksana's door and she tells Stone to keep the channel open. She turns the volume down all the way on her comm and stashes it in the drawer, leaving it open a crack to eavesdrop. <br><br>
  
 
It's just as well she's stashed that comm, because the person beyond the door is none other than the former Commandant of ADF-037, where she'd been held prisoner. There's no mistaking the man. She knows him: David Russell. She addresses him by a different name.<br><br>
 
It's just as well she's stashed that comm, because the person beyond the door is none other than the former Commandant of ADF-037, where she'd been held prisoner. There's no mistaking the man. She knows him: David Russell. She addresses him by a different name.<br><br>

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