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As usual a conflict of thoughts start, </br>
 
As usual a conflict of thoughts start, </br>
  
<span style=color:teal>Are they here for protection. </br></span>
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'Are they here for protection. '</br>
<span style=color:darkred>they might but remember the tales of Dalt at the gates of dawn?</br></span>
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~they might but remember the tales of Dalt at the gates of dawn?~</br>
<span style=color:teal>I am not as important for that, they are here for the sword.</br></span>
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'I am not as important for that, they are here for the sword.'</br>
<span style=color:darkred>Exactly.. they do not care about you... they only care to use you till you have no use left.</br></span>
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~Exactly.. they do not care about you... they only care to use you till you have no use left.~</br>
<span style=color:teal>They are family... Random, Bleys they showed they care.</br></span>
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'They are family... Random, Bleys they showed they care.'</br>
<span style=color:darkred>Suuure.. care. They care for you as a cute little puppy. But you've bitten their hands to often already. They're waiting to put you down.</br></br></span>
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~Suuure.. care. They care for you as a cute little puppy. But you've bitten their hands to often already. They're waiting to put you down.~</br></br>
  
 
Her eyes glide over to the other way of the road. She could rush for it. Rush ahead Vek said he would follow. </br>
 
Her eyes glide over to the other way of the road. She could rush for it. Rush ahead Vek said he would follow. </br>
 
They had caused trouble in Azcala before. Alvah looks down at the sword. </br>
 
They had caused trouble in Azcala before. Alvah looks down at the sword. </br>
 
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<span style=color:teal>If i go i burn alot of bridges.</br></span>
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'If i go i burn alot of bridges. '</br>
<span style=color:darkred>If you don't Azcala will never heal.</br></span>
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~If you don't Azcala will never heal.~</br>
<span style=color:teal>I am not in the power to heal it fully that takes time even with the sword</br></span>
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'I am not in the power to heal it fully that takes time even with the sword'</br>
<span style=color:darkred>You will be glorious, blood will flow, flames will devour.</br></span>
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~You will be glorious, blood will flow, flames will devour.~</br>
<span style=color:teal>What if something bad happens. What if Vek..</br></span>
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'What if something bad happens. What if Vek..'</br>
<span style=color:darkred>oh stop it.. Vek.. mighty Vek. He will be a force beside you to achieve your goal.</br></span>
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~oh stop it.. Vek.. mighty Vek. He will be a force beside you to achieve your goal.~</br>
 
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"And now with this in hand. I can put a stop to things." It was only a mere whisper Vek might have heard.</br>
 
"And now with this in hand. I can put a stop to things." It was only a mere whisper Vek might have heard.</br>
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Lets burn that place to the ground. </br>
 
Lets burn that place to the ground. </br>
<span style=color:teal>Blood will flow....</br></span>
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'Blood will flow....'</br>
<span style=color:darkred>Flames will devour....</br></span>
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~Flames will devour....~</br>
<span style=color:purple>Azcala will be freed</br></span>
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~'Azcala will be freed'~</br>
 
The sword seems lighter in her hands.</br>
 
The sword seems lighter in her hands.</br>
 
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Being ready for Tonacat to snatch it out of her hands Avaxala was surprised to see her mother.
 
Being ready for Tonacat to snatch it out of her hands Avaxala was surprised to see her mother.
  
Cihalas was careful with her ways and words but it was clear she wanted to get in the good graces of me.
 
Alvah enjoyed it. She allowed it to continue. </br>
 
Not late after Cihalas Aztilios came back. How pathetic. Alvah never liked the little weasel. Thinking she would ever love him or fall for him. Just to keep it in the family.... sickening. </br>
 
When Alvah dismissed Aztilios and send him away.she had not expected him to return with some force.</br>
 
He was convinced Vek was a bad i fluence. He swore to rid him out of my life. </br>
 
And with an attack which harmed both Aztilios almost did rid Vek out of Alvah's life. </br>
 
 
She was in time. Alcah nursed Vek back to health but seeing how fsr her family would go to destroy her happiness. Alvah was done. With the sword she decapitated Aztilios. No more would one come near her. Like a queen of blood and death, fire and passion she guarded Vek and her people.</br>
 
 
Cihalas, after the death of Aztilios went away. Perhaps fearing Alvah or fearing her own neck.
 
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Years pass, Vek recovered and stayed with her. Though Alvah. Or Avaxala had changed. She had become mean, cruel ruthless. She required loyalty or death from any of her subjects.  
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== Still needs to be worked out from this point ==
An elite female guard of amazonian like warriors have been trained and are by her side often.  
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* Confrontation with Cihalas
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* Xozla?
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* Aztilios returns and wants to replace Vek
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Vek gets hurt, Alvah mad, kills Aztilios or has him killed.  
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* Alvah goes of the rails and becomes a feared and cruel ruler.
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* Vek trying to sway her back to old ways and is send away by Alvah.
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* Gets convinced to wage war against Amber (Tonacat??)
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* start of the war, standing on top of a hill looking down eye to eye at ???? To be decided.
  
It was one night when Vek and Alvah retreated to their private chambers its that Vek spoke up.
 
Alvah had changed. She was not the same and Vek could not find a shred of who she once was in her ways. </br>
 
  
Avaxala laughed amused, mockingly.
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And thus the reign of Goddess-Empress Avaxala starts.  
She spoke with such disdain. That who ever would want to be a sniveling litle bitch like that.</br>
 
When Vek brought it up again. She would laugh and dismiss Vek.
 
Untill one day he really didn't return.
 
 
 
 
 
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The reign of Goddess-Empress Avaxala flourished.  
 
  
 
A vision of herself on a throne the burning glow of a city, the sunset and the home stone all glowing bright. Lighting the mount of bones and skulls her throne rests on.  
 
A vision of herself on a throne the burning glow of a city, the sunset and the home stone all glowing bright. Lighting the mount of bones and skulls her throne rests on.  
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With legs pulled up and arms over her knees she burries her face huddling up like a little ball. Alvah just starts to cry.
 
With legs pulled up and arms over her knees she burries her face huddling up like a little ball. Alvah just starts to cry.
  
Footsteps near her. Door opening and through tears and lashes she looks up who it is.
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Footsteps near her. Door opening and through tears and lashes she sees Vek.  
  
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((What would he say??))
  
==~Random THoughts~==
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==xxxx==
  
 
Looking to her right she sees Random leaning against a wall in the hallway of the Waymet.  He motions with his finger for silence and for Alvah to follow him.
 
Looking to her right she sees Random leaning against a wall in the hallway of the Waymet.  He motions with his finger for silence and for Alvah to follow him.
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"You know many things have been said of my reign but it is nearly universally agreed by my siblings that bringing coffee to Amber is a sign that it is my goal to be benevolent to my people.  Can't say I disagree. Oberon, among his many faults, was a tea drinker. By bringing coffee to Amber it has been discovered in uncountable shadows.  Apparently including the one this waymet is in.  I see the sword is being cooperative.  It will do that.  I can sense it trying to woo you with dreams.  The jewel is blocking its attempts to reach out to others of your line but it can stop it contacting you because you hold it.  Its sentience is of a non-verbal kind but my understanding is that it wishes to give pleasure and pain. Hence the name.  I didn't see your dream but the stone tells me the sword is attempting to lure you into taking it to Azcala.    Expect it to play with your head.  "   
 
"You know many things have been said of my reign but it is nearly universally agreed by my siblings that bringing coffee to Amber is a sign that it is my goal to be benevolent to my people.  Can't say I disagree. Oberon, among his many faults, was a tea drinker. By bringing coffee to Amber it has been discovered in uncountable shadows.  Apparently including the one this waymet is in.  I see the sword is being cooperative.  It will do that.  I can sense it trying to woo you with dreams.  The jewel is blocking its attempts to reach out to others of your line but it can stop it contacting you because you hold it.  Its sentience is of a non-verbal kind but my understanding is that it wishes to give pleasure and pain. Hence the name.  I didn't see your dream but the stone tells me the sword is attempting to lure you into taking it to Azcala.    Expect it to play with your head.  "   
  
He sighs, removing the jewel of judgment.  "Life was simpler when inanimate objects didn't poke around in my head.  I can't get a straight answer from it.  You know i was always a hedonist.  My brothers fought between each other for everything.  Anything one had the others wants. Our whole family is fraught with personal competitions. Eric & Corwin. Osric & Benedict. Elfwine & Finndo, Llewella and Fiona.  And the family has its fair share of kin that for one reason or another hate the homeland.  Borlak, Orasolla, Nina and Emilie, Delwin and Sand, and of course Dalt for a long time.  The next generation is full of the same kind of conflicts but for the most part they were not raised under Oberon's thumb.  Once i walked the pattern I spent most of my time in shadow just to get away from the drama. "
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He sighs, removing the jewel of judgment.  "Life was simpler when inanimate objects didn't poke around in my head.  I can't get a straight answer from it.  You know i was always a hedonist.  My brothers fought bewtween each other for everything.  Anything one had the otehrs wants. Eric and Corwin. Osric and Benedict.
 
 
He pats a spot between the two of them.  "Put the sword here.  You are safe to release it.  Its not going anywhere. " 
 
 
 
After she does he says, "I told you all that because that blade has an intellect and an ego of its own and it will try to control you.  Now that you've touched it I can sense it is trying to convince you to go to Azcala.  No matter what the blade says, offers, or wants, the moment you entered Azcala Tonacat would seize the blade and probably put you in his family sacrifice rotation.  The sword is powerful but not enough to help you defeat Tonacat.  I am working on something else for that."
 
 
 
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While listening to Random and now and then giving the sword a glance as it lays between them, Alvah looks tired, ashamed, worried. It is a look that hasn't touched her face often, gratefully she smells the coffee, indeed benevolent king. Though the slight smile that sparked at the scent and thought of coffee fades quick as Alvah once more glances at the sword. Her eyes do actively avoid Random's.
 
 
 
In a soft voice staring at the coffeepot Alvah replies after a moment.
 
 
 
"I'll be honest, i was scared to pick it up. Though when i saw it was Xolotl something just snapped and i had the urge to ram it through his chest.
 
He was already withering away though. "
 
 
 
Alvah looks worried at the sword.
 
 
 
"The dreams will stop right? After i release it? After we hid it away? Tonacat will not find me, or it..... right?"
 
 
 
For the first time she looks up since they sat down to look directly at Random.
 
 
 
 
 
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