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== Background ==
 
== Background ==
  
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Jin used to travel, selling his sword not for money but pleasure and fame. After years, he grew jaded of the lifestyle. He became a human farmer in an isolated place, married, had a child and raised cattle. Hewas never very good at farming but he managed.
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Jin used to travel, selling his sword not for money but pleasure and fame. After years, he grew jaded of the lifestyle. He became a human farmer in an isolated place, married, had 3 kids and raised cattle. hH was never very good at farming but he managed.
  
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Torog's earthquakes brought an end to all that. The first destroyed his farmhouse and killed his wife, who was trying to protect their child. After hearing the challenge, he brought out his sword for the first time in years, told his child to look after the farm until he returned and walked away.  
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Torog's earthquakes brought an end to all that. The first destroyed his farmhouse and killed his wife, who was trying to protect his baby. After hearing the challenge, he brought out his sword for the first time in years, told his eldest to look after the farm until he returned and walked away.  
  
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His child just stood there and stared as he saw his father's face change for the first time from that of grizzled human farmer to the deathly white blank monstrosity that would be the last thing Torog would ever see. <br>
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His eldest just stood there and stared as he saw his father's face change for the first time from that of grizzled human farmer to the deathly white blank monstrosity that would be the last thing Torog would ever see. <br>
 
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