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The central upper city sits under a large glass dome and enjoys beautiful sunshine most of the time while the inhabitants of the middle and under city dwell in dim or bright neon lights and under a steel sky.
 
The central upper city sits under a large glass dome and enjoys beautiful sunshine most of the time while the inhabitants of the middle and under city dwell in dim or bright neon lights and under a steel sky.
  
About 10%-15% of the hive is uninhabitable due to toxic waste, collapse of ceilings and/or building or even worse reasons. Such sections mainly are located in the lower city's outer skirts, especially in the northwest.
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About 10%-15% of the hive is inhabitable due to toxic waste, collapse of ceilings and/or building or even worse reasons. Such sections mainly are located in the lower city's outer skirts, especially in the northwest.
  
 
The hive features two large spaceports (Hastus East and Hastus West) connecting the city with the orbit.
 
The hive features two large spaceports (Hastus East and Hastus West) connecting the city with the orbit.

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