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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“It used to be a priority. Food, I mean.”  I thought back to childhood meals with my family, it being one of the few occasions the cease-fire in the constant sibling bickering and horseplay meant we could all relax and enjoy each others’ company.  Homesickness stirred, an old familiar pain, and I squelched it.  I also recognized a rebuke when I heard it and dutifully picked up the bowl. And knowing full well how it would look, damage already done, I took up the spoon and downed a bite anyway.  My eyebrows lifted in surprise.<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“It used to be a priority. Food, I mean.”  I thought back to childhood meals with my family, it being one of the few occasions the cease-fire in the constant sibling bickering and horseplay meant we could all relax and enjoy each others’ company.  Homesickness stirred, an old familiar pain, and I squelched it.  I also recognized a rebuke when I heard it and dutifully picked up the bowl. And knowing full well how it would look, damage already done, I took up the spoon and downed a bite anyway.  My eyebrows lifted in surprise.<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Cinnamon?”<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Cinnamon?”<br>   
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I took another bite.  ''Yup.  Cinnamon.''  It added an unexpected fillip to the protein paste we’d been eating for breakfast and lunch as a way to save the better provisions for dinner, and not for the first time I wondered what Joshua would have become had his life not taken the turn it had.  I spooned up several more bites before I realized what I was doing and paused halfway to another, saying, “It’s good cold.  And I’m sorry I didn’t think to try it when it was hot.”<br>   
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I took another bite.  ''Yup.  Cinnamon.''  It added an unexpected fillip to the protein paste they’d been eating for breakfast and lunch as a way to save the better provisions for dinner, and not for the first time I wondered what Joshua would have become had his life not taken the turn it had.  I spooned up several more bites before I realized what I was doing and paused halfway to another, saying, “It’s good cold.  And I’m sorry I didn’t think to try it when it was hot.”<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I kept on eating, less to prove my statement and more because having been given a taste my body demanded more of it.  When it was gone and the spoon polished, I put it aside and looked up at him.<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;I kept on eating, less to prove my statement and more because having been given a taste my body demanded more of it.  When it was gone and the spoon polished, I put it aside and looked up at him.<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Is there any more?  Or did I really fall down the rabbit hole and miss the call for seconds?”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Is there any more?  Or did I really fall down the rabbit hole and miss the call for seconds?”<br>

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