Editing Talk:Heaven's Mandate (section)

==David Drake==
# Edit: [[The Vitreous Fulcrum]] now includes changes after the last battle.
# New: road system described under [[Eye of Hiparkes]].
# New: town at the center of the Eye of Hiparkes: [[God Crossing]].
# New: Automata section begun with [[The Gardener]].
# New: Flavor text for [[Selenn]], Nathan's mother, added to the contacts for Rivers.
# New: Flavor text for [[Salvar]], Nathan's brother, added to contacts for Rivers.
# New: Flavor text for [[Othoclase]], gemlord.

--battle of three forces, 8/12--
# New: [[Battle of Breaking Iron]] is complete (first draft).

--failure and intrigue, 8/20--
# New: [[Kena]], that seductress, added.
# New: [[The Divisions]], the list of good and bad little spirits.

--The Halls of Venus, 9/2--
# New: [[Scales of the Dragon]], the white jade superheavy plate.
# New: [[The Halls of Venus]].
# New: [[Chehbraterazim]], a sobeksis of the grey river.
# Expanded: [[Salvar]].

--The City Mastered, 9/16--
# New: [[A School For All]]: (3/4) news spreads of a school beginning operation in the Plum Blossom Retreat.
# New: [[Spring Market]]: (2/2) Rivers tries to have fun (A compilation project!)
# New: [[Serpent Swords]]: (3/3) Irrational Hope and Unbreakable Faith.
# New: [[The First Generation]]: (2/2) Power and Humanity: the first three amalgams.

--Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First, 9/30--
# New: [[Chronicles of the Daybringers]]: My totally serious, dark take on what could happen when one of our teams leaves home.
# Expanded: [[Kena]]: Once again, mostly about love, sorcery, and the relationship between Rivers and his mentor.
# New: [[Chapter 1]]: Carnage!  Slaughter!  We're ready for those things, but can we get a room for the night?
# New: [[Pai and Pei]]: River's assistants.
# New: [[Lyssa]]: Liaison to the Infinite City.
# New: [[Under Bridges]]: River's horse, one of Murakan's finest.

--Civil War Averted, 10/7--
# New: [[Chapter 2]]: Gunzosha Powered Armor: Sure it's sexy, but in the summer?
# New: [[The Bandit King]]: As you get older, the toys just get bigger.
# New: [[Chapter 3]]: Why you don't mess with Yao Ye.
# New: [[Blood Like Sparks]]: Yet another... enemy?
# New: [[The Southern Expedition]]: Doomed souls struggling for the light.  2 quick sections.
# Expanded: [[God Crossing]]: On Rivers' day off, the city's planning must continue.

--Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips, 10/21--
# New: [[An Early Departure]]
# New: [[Site 1: Firewander]]
# New: [[Site 2: Rathess]]
# New: [[Site 3: Diamond Hearth]]
# New: [[Site 4: An Teng]]
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 4]] Melee in the streets of Varsi?<br>
# New: [[Gatehouse of the Five Winds]]: Fleets.
# New: [[Panoply of the Sun]]: I started it, but it's going to take a beastload of work.  Check it out!
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: A quick section added.
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: Another quick section added.

--Oops: 11/4--
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 5]]: Sagacious Shu Zhuang.
# New: The [[Cerulean Sage]]: Preparing to learn a new style once snake is finished.
# Expanded: Expansion to [[Marta]]: Part 1 of SSW intros, (the test).
# Expanded: [[The Halls of Venus]]: Part 2 of SSW intros.
# New: [[Unity of Dreams]]: Part 3 of SSW intros.
# New: [[Seven Season's Widow]]: An entry of her own. (revised to reflect her lack of athletics).
# Expanded: [[Berren]]: More description of life in God Crossing, with further Lookshy scheming.
# New: [[Gaiden 5.5]]: Lu Fei, Seraph of the Burning Bastion.
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 6]]: Where has the sun gone?
# New: [[Reforging the Promise]]
# New: [[Mite Xu]]: just to add a little flavor to our amalgamated servants.
# New: [[Lu Fei]]: Detailing a bit about Lu Fei's bad luck and his present situation.
# New: Expansion of Lu Fei to include the letter requesting amabassadorial status.

--Faces of the Enemy (Messages and their Bearers): 12/16/06--
# Expanded: [[Mayhiros Tesos]].
# New: Added [[Walker in Darkness]] and three of his servants as blank stubs.
# New: [[Typhon]].  Busy little bugger.

--A Trial of Valor: 12/30/06--
# New: [[Crucible of Celestial Portion]]: It's River's job, so it's off screen, but that doesn't mean it's trivial.

--The Consequences of Action: 1/6/07--
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: The End and the Beginning.
# New: [[Amilar Vondy]]: Lookshy politics have grown less subtle of late.
# New: [[Chapter 7]]: Still More Day to Bring, with an appearance by the newest Daybringer.
# New: [[Thorns]]: I'm not too happy with it, so I'll probably edit it, but it's a little picture of Rivers considering the city of Thorns.
# Edited: Collected gens Amilar under one banner.  The house is at the very least neutral, as its head appears to be.

--The Righteous Strike Back: 1/13/07--
# New: [[Open Skies Above]]: Sorry, you're not invited, but you can still send gifts.  Hearthstones are preferred.
# New: [[Putting Out Fires]]: Rivers and Skies and busting heads.
# New: [[Falling Bridges]]: Reconstruction in the south, and moderate angst, deflected by Mite Xu.
# New: [[Shadow of a Different Sun]]: Rock and a hard place.
# New: [[Responsibility and Authority]]: Happy endings.
# Expanded: [[Rivers Between Us]]
# New: [[The Headless]]: Pity Wu.

--Distant Peals of Thunder: 1/20/07--
# New: [[Applications of Enlightenment]]: New page for organizing custom charms, since 1/2 of the players have them.  
# New: [[Defy the Armor's Dream]]: Posted the one custom charm that I have in full (I don't have the virtue listed for the spirit charms you sent me, Jason.  Sorry!)
# Edited: [[The Fivefold Chronology]]: Added dates as far back as I have them recorded as gm.

--Wind in the Doorway: 1/27/07--
# Expanded: [[Solar-Forged Glories]]: Added a couple of the artifacts from last session.
# Picture: [[Sun-Blackened Pinions]]: Crane.
# Expanded: [[Rivers Between Us]]: Tossed up his intimacies for funsies.

--Darkening Skies: 2/10/07--
# New: [[Secret Avalanche]] gets his own page.  I wish I could have written it... without the crappy writing.
# New: [[Root of the East]], Rivers' trusted advisor.  Poor devil.

--Cloud Break: 3/10/07--
# New: [[Chapter 8]]: At last.  So many double meanings it will take eight fully independent and flurry-able simultaneous actions to shake a stick at them!

--Tree Hunting: 3/17/07--
# Expanded: [[Cerulean Sage]]: Decided he should really be a divinity, and then brought him in to start teaching Rivers.
# Added: [[Outside the Bear's Cave]]: The next story will begin soon.  You are ready.  Are they?