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"You already ruined the kitchen already once over this boy, are you sure this is wise. You can be so. Impulsive." </br> | "You already ruined the kitchen already once over this boy, are you sure this is wise. You can be so. Impulsive." </br> | ||
− | I know dad means well. But he always just says the wrong thing. He always sort of triggers me. But | + | I know dad means well. But he always just says the wrong thing. He always sort of triggers me. But i am sure Russell wants to get back together, i believe him. </br> |
Knowing that whatever i say dad is not going to agree with anyway. So i just roll my eyes and walk off. </br> | Knowing that whatever i say dad is not going to agree with anyway. So i just roll my eyes and walk off. </br> | ||
− | "I was not | + | "I was not finnished Alvah!" </br> |
Walking out of the front door i slam it shut. Letting the windows rattle. </br> | Walking out of the front door i slam it shut. Letting the windows rattle. </br> | ||
− | With my helmet under my arm | + | With my helmet under my arm i drive off. There should be a party on the beach tonight. Russell invited me to see of we could get back together and at least talk things out. </br> |
I arrive at the beach park my bike and look around. I hear no music. I see no groups of people. | I arrive at the beach park my bike and look around. I hear no music. I see no groups of people. | ||
− | Calmly | + | Calmly i walk over to the spot where they usually make the fire and see noone there. </br> |
− | Yeah | + | Yeah i absolutly don't trust this. Something is very off. I walk cautiously back to my bike. And there they are. Russell and two of his goon friends. They are just big buff jocks but i wonder if their brains ever got fully developed.</br> |
Usually there is another friend with them. </br> | Usually there is another friend with them. </br> | ||
Taking a step closer in realize that friend would be here somewhere. </br> | Taking a step closer in realize that friend would be here somewhere. </br> | ||
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4 of them against me. They will go down.</br> | 4 of them against me. They will go down.</br> | ||
− | I turn to grab the baseballbat and yank it out of his hands. Immediately using the | + | I turn to grab the baseballbat and yank it out of his hands. Immediately using the momento from yanking to turn it in a full swing. </br> |
I hit home and hear something crack within Piedro not waiting to check i turn tk the others. They now have themselves improvised weapons. Jumper cables, tire iron, crowbar. </br> | I hit home and hear something crack within Piedro not waiting to check i turn tk the others. They now have themselves improvised weapons. Jumper cables, tire iron, crowbar. </br> | ||
The fight is short since they are with more they land a couple of hits on me. I know my shoulder is probably broken or has a tear. A concussion, maybe a couple of ribs are cracked. </br> | The fight is short since they are with more they land a couple of hits on me. I know my shoulder is probably broken or has a tear. A concussion, maybe a couple of ribs are cracked. </br> | ||
− | The four are down. I | + | The four are down. I let them there. They can find help themselves. With tears streaming. Or blood, or both. </br> |
I drive off. Maybe a bit to fast maybe a bit to wild but i have to get away... </br> | I drive off. Maybe a bit to fast maybe a bit to wild but i have to get away... </br> | ||
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In between sniffs </br> | In between sniffs </br> | ||
− | "No | + | "No i am not, you were right dad. That asshole was waiting for me with 3 of his friends. They tried to beat me up. I got all four of them down... dad they really tried seriously wound me." </br> |
− | "Alvah where are you | + | "Alvah where are you i will pick you up. Stop driving. Wait for me. You sound hurt."</br> |
− | "It's | + | "It's okey i'm almost home. It is calm enough on the road. It's faster when i just drive home. It's not that bad." </br> |
− | I know dad tried to say something else but at that point a sharp pain in my shoulder probably the break shifting due to the road and | + | I know dad tried to say something else but at that point a sharp pain in my shoulder probably the break shifting due to the road and i lose control over my bike. </br> |
− | I don't know if | + | I don't know if i said something, screamed or if dad said something. But when i felt body hit the floor it all went blissfully black. </br> |
− | The dreams were intense but | + | The dreams were intense but i could swear i could hear dad sometimes. </br> |
− | When | + | When i woke up i was in my own room. Medical monitors next to me. An IVdrip probably antibiotics, fluids some form of sustenance. Don't know how long i've been out. </br> |
I look to the side and see dad in a chair. I think he is sleeping. The moment i stir he almost jumps up. </br> | I look to the side and see dad in a chair. I think he is sleeping. The moment i stir he almost jumps up. </br> | ||
"I am sorry. I should have listened to you." </br> | "I am sorry. I should have listened to you." </br> | ||
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