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<big>'''''~An Excerpt from The Adventures of Raphael'''''</big> | <big>'''''~An Excerpt from The Adventures of Raphael'''''</big> | ||
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Civic duties attended to and good byes said, the expedition team piles into a Demlier German staff car with side mounted machine guns. It has two seats in front, geared for driver and Gunner/Navigator, but the rest are 4 rows that seat 4 each. Zachary and his Driver are in the front seats already. | Civic duties attended to and good byes said, the expedition team piles into a Demlier German staff car with side mounted machine guns. It has two seats in front, geared for driver and Gunner/Navigator, but the rest are 4 rows that seat 4 each. Zachary and his Driver are in the front seats already. | ||
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As the long drive starts the vehicle clearly has great maneuverability and speed. It does seem to have a powerful motor but the mechanic in Rafe can't help thinking the engine sounds odd. As if cylinders are knocking. | As the long drive starts the vehicle clearly has great maneuverability and speed. It does seem to have a powerful motor but the mechanic in Rafe can't help thinking the engine sounds odd. As if cylinders are knocking. | ||
− | Wrecker catches | + | Wrecker catches Race's eyes, quizzically, "That engine sounds damaged, doesn't it?" |
Turning to lean forward he asks, "Hey, ah...Zach? What's wrong with the drive? Its making a funny noise?" | Turning to lean forward he asks, "Hey, ah...Zach? What's wrong with the drive? Its making a funny noise?" |