Editing Chitty Chitty Bang Bang, Mr. Hepplewhite?

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As the long drive starts the vehicle clearly has great maneuverability and speed. It does seem to have a powerful motor but the mechanic in Rafe can't help thinking the engine sounds odd. As if cylinders are knocking.
 
As the long drive starts the vehicle clearly has great maneuverability and speed. It does seem to have a powerful motor but the mechanic in Rafe can't help thinking the engine sounds odd. As if cylinders are knocking.
  
Wrecker catches Rafe's eyes, quizzically, "That engine sounds damaged, doesn't it?"
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Wrecker catches Race's eyes, quizzically, "That engine sounds damaged, doesn't it?"
  
 
Turning to lean forward he asks, "Hey, ah...Zach? What's wrong with the drive? Its making a funny noise?"
 
Turning to lean forward he asks, "Hey, ah...Zach? What's wrong with the drive? Its making a funny noise?"

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