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Edward, surprisingly, refused the call of his mentor and lover.  Instead, Edward was taken by the Sith's torture droids and tormented until he was to break.  Ironically, the young man was eventually able to escape on his own when Revan's fleets were destroyed by Malak in his bid to overthrow the Republic.  Excommunicated from the Jedi Order because of his ties to Darth Revan, Edward Avalon's mind suffered severely from the stresses he endured as a Sith and he ended up being captured by the Mandalorians and enslaved.  Edward learned much from his captors and eventually turned the tables on them, slaving them and escaping into the galaxy as a whole.
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Edward, surprisingly, refused the call of his mentor and lover.  Instead, Edward was taken by the Sith's torture droids and tormented until he was to break.  Ironically, the young man was eventually able to escape on his own when Revan's fleets were destroyed by Malak in his bid to overthrow the Republic.
  
  
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When Edward finally escaped, he found that the Jedi Order had been largely exterminated by the Sith and that Darth Revan had recanted of her evil before disappearing.  Worse, the Galactic Republic had abandoned the war against the Sith and made thousands of worlds susceptible to its crueltiesDisillusioned, Edward took the Mandalorian battle techniques he's learned and signed up to become a mercenary and professional duelist.  Leaving his past as a Jedi failure behind.
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Excommunicated from the Jedi Order because of his ties to Darth Revan, Edward Avalon's mind suffered severely from the stresses he endured as a Sith and he ended up being captured by the Mandalorians and enslaved.  Edward learned much from his captors and eventually turned the tables on them, slaving them and escaping into the galaxy as a whole.
  
  
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Edward is but one of the many mercenaries hired on the [[A New Hope]] for security.
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When Edward finally escaped, he found that the Jedi Order had been largely exterminated by the Sith and that Darth Revan had recanted of her evil before disappearing.  Worse, the Galactic Republic had abandoned the war against the Sith and made thousands of worlds susceptible to its cruelties.
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Disillusioned, Edward took the Mandalorian battle techniques he's learned and signed up to become a mercenary and professional duelist.  Leaving his past as a Jedi failure behind.
  
  
 
[[Knights Of The Old Republic III]]
 
[[Knights Of The Old Republic III]]

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