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==BACKGROUND==
 
==BACKGROUND==
  
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Excie Davis was a smart, curious girl with a good heart; a real diamond in the rough. Her parents were drug addicts and gamblers barely scraping by. She was always small and timid, not like the mythological heroes she read about to escape her harsh reality. She was often left alone or her parents would have friends over so she would stay out of the way and hide all by herself, wishing she had friends, wishing she had a real family. Though she was always kind to everyone, it was like she was born under a bad sign, doomed to a tragic ending equal to the goodness that dwelled within her. At a young age she was forced to drop out of school so that she could earn money to help her family out. At only fourteen her father brought her to a sleazy modeling agency and basically sold her out for money. She slaved as an underage, underpaid and underappreciated model for three years. Though she tried to make the best of it and learned to love the fashion world, it can eat you alive. She started to make a name for herself but the more money she made the worse things got. She met all the wrong people and became a teenage addict, partying and purging, making wrong decisions and becoming who she promised herself she would never become. She gave her parents money in an attempt to help them and it only made things worse for them. Her mother overdosed and her father got in too deep gambling and disappeared. She had never been more alone, more lost and headed towards destruction.<br>
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xcie Davis was a smart, curious girl with a good heart; a real diamond in the rough. Her parents were drug addicts and gamblers barely scraping by. She was always small and timid, not like the mythological heroes she read about to escape her harsh reality. She was often left alone or her parents would have friends over so she would stay out of the way and hide all by herself, wishing she had friends, wishing she had a real family. Though she was always kind to everyone, it was like she was born under a bad sign, doomed to a tragic ending equal to the goodness that dwelled within her. At a young age she was forced to drop out of school so that she could earn money to help her family out. At only fourteen her father brought her to a sleazy modeling agency and basically sold her out for money. She slaved as an underage, underpaid and underappreciated model for three years. Though she tried to make the best of it and learned to love the fashion world, it can eat you alive. She started to make a name for herself but the more money she made the worse things got. She met all the wrong people and became a teenage addict, partying and purging, making wrong decisions and becoming who she promised herself she would never become. She gave her parents money in an attempt to help them and it only made things worse for them. Her mother overdosed and her father got in too deep gambling and disappeared. She had never been more alone, more lost and headed towards destruction.<br>
  
 
Then everything changed. Out of the blue a miracle occurred and she was chosen to become one of the Sovereign Powers of Earth. Suddenly she was the Saint of Obscurity, but no spirit or boon companion arrived to explain her newfound power or purpose. Instead something sinister slithered into her life and once again took advantage of her. Hather Cristnos was a sly Deceiver who had concocted the perfect plan to procure a pet Power. He showed her an image of her own doomed existence, she saw her pathetic life from birth to her death, ODing just like her mother. He explained that worse than her own fate that the world was facing impending doom and only she could save it. The handsome stranger orchestrated a daring adventure where Excie used her newfound abilities to barely snatch victory out of the jaws of defeat. Together they saved what they could of the world, Cristnos explained that her efforts had protected the town of Obscurity, a slice of her own power but that the rest of the world had been lost. She believed him. She could feel the change, the Estate of Obscurity itself was within her. Illusions and lies made Excie believe his story, and she became dependent upon Hather for his advice and his affection.<br>
 
Then everything changed. Out of the blue a miracle occurred and she was chosen to become one of the Sovereign Powers of Earth. Suddenly she was the Saint of Obscurity, but no spirit or boon companion arrived to explain her newfound power or purpose. Instead something sinister slithered into her life and once again took advantage of her. Hather Cristnos was a sly Deceiver who had concocted the perfect plan to procure a pet Power. He showed her an image of her own doomed existence, she saw her pathetic life from birth to her death, ODing just like her mother. He explained that worse than her own fate that the world was facing impending doom and only she could save it. The handsome stranger orchestrated a daring adventure where Excie used her newfound abilities to barely snatch victory out of the jaws of defeat. Together they saved what they could of the world, Cristnos explained that her efforts had protected the town of Obscurity, a slice of her own power but that the rest of the world had been lost. She believed him. She could feel the change, the Estate of Obscurity itself was within her. Illusions and lies made Excie believe his story, and she became dependent upon Hather for his advice and his affection.<br>

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