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===Valkr  Thane  ===
 
===Valkr  Thane  ===
 
'''AKA: Valk'''
 
'''AKA: Valk'''
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A Purple Oni, about Kross's own age. Valk had been with the Cloud Junkers for about a year when Kross joined up and the pair became best friends. Valk worked with Kross in the repair shop, and while he wasn't as inventive as the Kitsune, the Oni knew the Industrial PowerLoaders and Labor-Golems like the back of his hand. Valk was also a physical powerhouse and skilled with a boarding ax.
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A Purple Oni, about Kross's own age. Valk had been with the Cloud Junkers for about a year when Kross joined up and the pair became best friends. Valk had trained with boarding axes and had a way with natural magic (Invoker?) that complimented Kross's engineering aptitude.
  
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Kross spoke to Valk to get him to leave with him, and the Oni became mad. "How can we leave all the other kids? How can we leave Makko?"  
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He spoke to Valk to get him to leave with him, and the Oni became mad. "How can we leave all the other kids? How can we live Makko?"  
  
 
Valk sees Kross's running away as a betrayal, especially in light of Makko's scars.
 
Valk sees Kross's running away as a betrayal, especially in light of Makko's scars.

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