Editing Mirza

''"Most people think time is like a river that flows swift and sure in one direction, but I have seen the face of time, and I can tell you: They are wrong. It's more like a big ball of... timey... wimey... stuff.''

''Did I get my quotes mixed up? That's okay, I can rewind and try it again."''

{| class="wikitable infobox" align="right" style="border:1px solid black; padding: 2pt; margin: 4pt"
|-
! colspan="6" | Mirza
|-
! align="left"|Real Name:
|Alfred Young
|-
! align="left"|Path:
| colspan="2"|Moros
! align="left"|Order:
| colspan="2"|Mysterium
|-
! align="left"|Virtue:
| colspan="2"|Temperance
! align="left"|Vice:
| colspan="2"|Wrath
|-
! colspan="6" | Attributes
|-
! colspan="2" |Mental
! colspan="2" |Physical
! colspan="2" |Social
|-
!Intelligence:
|●●○○○
!Strength:
|●●○○○
!Presence:
|●●○○○
|-
!Wits:
|●●○○○
!Dexterity:
|●●○○○
!Manipulation:
|●○○○○
|-
!Resolve:
|●●●●○
!Stamina:
|●●●○○
!Composure:
|●●●●○
|-
! colspan="3" | Skills
! colspan="3" | Arcana
|-
! align="left"|Academics:
| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Archaeology)
! align="left"|Death:
| colspan="2" |●○○○○ (Ruling)
|-
! align="left"|Investigation:
| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Rotes)
! align="left"|Matter:
| colspan="2" |●●○○○ (Ruling)
|-
! align="left"|Occult:
| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Rotes)
! align="left"|Time:
| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Common)
|-
! align="left"|Athletics:
| colspan="2" |●●●●○
! align="left"|Spirit:
| colspan="2" |○○○○○ (Inferior)
|-
! align="left"|Survival
| colspan="2" |○○○○○ (Rotes)
|-
! align="left"|Weaponry
| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Fencing)
|-
! align="left"|Expression
| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Scholarship)
|-
! colspan="3" | Merits
|-
! align="left"| Sanctum:
| colspan="2"|●○○○○ (Shared)
|-
! align="left"| High Speech:
| colspan="2"|●○○○○ (Free)
|-
! align="left"|Health:
| colspan="3"|□ □ □ □ □ □ □ □ 
| 8/8
|-
! align="left"|Willpower:
| colspan="3"|■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■
|8/8
|-
! align="left"|Mana:
| colspan="3"|■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ □ □ □ □ □ 
|7/12
|-
! align="left"|Wisdom:
| colspan="3"|●●●●●●●○○○
|7
|-
! align="left"|Gnosis:
| colspan="3"|●●●○○○○○○○
|3
|-
! align="left"|Defense:
|2
|-
! align="left"|Initiative:
|6
|-
! align="left"|Movement:
|9
|}

===Appearance===
Mirza is a thin, scholarly looking man, just about average height. He has dirty blond hair, a small beard, and wireframe glasses. He dresses in smart business casual, usually earthtones, and sometimes wears a fedora.

===Nimbus===
'Ancient' Visual manifestations appear as scrolls of parchment, written upon with intricate scripts, obscure glyphs, and arcane diagrams. Time seems to slow down and stretch out, giving a feeling of extreme age. Surroundings appear as if undisturbed for centuries or millennia, covered with a thick layer of dust and smelling of stagnant air.

===Posessions===
A heavy lead key, about four inches long with an ornate skull design on the bow. Seems as if it might open a graveyard, mausoleum, or tomb. (Dedicated magical tool for path/order)

A bone from a human hand, carved with detailed scrimshaw depicting death as a winged skeleton, and a raven chasing a moth. Tied with a string to be worn as a charm. (Dedicated magical tool for the arcanum of Death)

A thick electrum coin, about an inch and a half in diameter and a green-tinged gold in color. Struck on one side with the image of a hammer, and on the other side with an alchemical design of overlapping shapes. (Dedicated magical tool for the arcanum of Matter)

An antique silver pocket watch, with a hunter case engraved an hourglass on the outside. (Dedicated magical tool for the arcanum of Time)

===Rotes===
'''Speak with the Dead''' (Death 1, Covert)<br>
Roll '''Wits + Occult + Death''' (8 Dice)<br>
Can see, hear, and speak with ghosts in twilight.

'''Postcognition''' (Time 2, Covert) <br>
Roll '''Intelligence + Investigation + Time''' (9 Dice)<br>
View a replay of past events, 1 round per casting success.

'''Shifting Sands''' (Time 3, Vulgar)<br>
Roll '''Resolve + Occult + Time''' (12 Dice)<br>
Costs '''1 Mana''' <br>
Rewinds time one round, to the beginning of the caster's last action. Can be cast any time during the round. Does not undo effects on the caster.
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-''"Most people think time is like a river that flows swift and sure in one direction, but I have seen the face of time, and I can tell you: They are wrong. Time is... more like a big ball of... timey... wimey... stuff.''
+''"Most people think time is like a river that flows swift and sure in one direction, but I have seen the face of time, and I can tell you: They are wrong. It's more like a big ball of... timey... wimey... stuff.''
 ''Did I get my quotes mixed up? That's okay, I can rewind and try it again."''
-{{Template:MtAw Character Sheet
+{| class="wikitable infobox" align="right" style="border:1px solid black; padding: 2pt; margin: 4pt"
-|shadowname=Mirza
+|-
-|player=[http://forum.rpg.net/member.php?u=26754 ShanG]
+! colspan="6" | Mirza
-|game=[[NWoD MtA Rising Stars|Rising Stars]]
+|-
-|realname=Alfred Young
+! align="left"|Real Name:
-|path=Moros
+|Alfred Young
-|order=Mysterium
+|-
-|virtue=Temperance
+! align="left"|Path:
-|vice=Wrath
+| colspan="2"|Moros
-|intelligence=●●○○○
+! align="left"|Order:
-|wits=●●○○○
+| colspan="2"|Mysterium
-|resolve=●●●●○
+|-
-|strength=●●○○○
+! align="left"|Virtue:
-|dexterity=●●○○○
+| colspan="2"|Temperance
-|stamina=●●●○○
+! align="left"|Vice:
-|presence=●●○○○
+| colspan="2"|Wrath
-|manipulation=●○○○○
+|-
-|composure=●●●●○
+! colspan="6" | Attributes
-|skill1_name=Academics:
+|-
-|skill1_level=●●●●○
+! colspan="2" |Mental
-|skill1_tags=(Archaeology)
+! colspan="2" |Physical
-|skill2_name=Investigation:
+! colspan="2" |Social
-|skill2_level=●●●○○|skill2_tags=(Rotes)|skill3_name=Occult:
+|-
-|skill3_level=●●●●○
+!Intelligence:
-|skill3_tags=(Rotes)
+|●●○○○
-|skill4_name=Athletics:
+!Strength:
-|skill4_level=●●●●○
+|●●○○○
-|skill5_name=Survival
+!Presence:
-|skill5_level=○○○○○
+|●●○○○
-|skill5_tags=(Rotes)
+|-
-|skill6_name=Weaponry
+!Wits:
-|skill6_level=●●●○○
+|●●○○○
-|skill6_tags=(Fencing)
+!Dexterity:
-|skill7_name=Expression
+|●●○○○
-|skill7_level=●●●●○
+!Manipulation:
-|skill7_tags=(Scholarship)
+|●○○○○
-|arcana1_name=Death:
+|-
-|arcana1_level=●○○○○
+!Resolve:
-|arcana1_tags=(Ruling)
+|●●●●○
-|arcana2_name=Matter:
+!Stamina:
-|arcana2_level=●●○○○
+|●●●○○
-|arcana2_tags=(Ruling)
+!Composure:
-|arcana3_name=Time:
+|●●●●○
-|arcana3_level=●●●○○
+|-
-|arcana3_tags=(Common)
+! colspan="3" | Skills
-|arcana4_name=Spirit:
+! colspan="3" | Arcana
-|arcana4_level=○○○○○
+|-
-|arcana4_tags=(Inferior)
+! align="left"|Academics:
-|merit1_name=Sanctum:
+| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Archaeology)
-|merit1_level=●<span style="color:#C0C0C0">●●●</span>○
+! align="left"|Death:
-|merit1_tags=(Shared)
+| colspan="2" |●○○○○ (Ruling)
-|merit2_name=High Speech:
+|-
-|merit2_level=●○○○○
+! align="left"|Investigation:
-|merit2_tags=(Free)
+| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Rotes)
-|health=□ □ □ □ □ □ □ □
+! align="left"|Matter:
-|willpower=■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ □ □
+| colspan="2" |●●○○○ (Ruling)
-|mana=■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ □ □ □ □ □ □
+|-
-|wisdom=●●●●●●●○○○
+! align="left"|Occult:
-|gnosis=●●●○○○○○○○
+| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Rotes)
-|defense=2
+! align="left"|Time:
-|initiative=6
+| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Common)
-|movement=9}}
+|-
+! align="left"|Athletics:
+| colspan="2" |●●●●○
+! align="left"|Spirit:
+| colspan="2" |○○○○○ (Inferior)
+|-
+! align="left"|Survival
+| colspan="2" |○○○○○ (Rotes)
+|-
+! align="left"|Weaponry
+| colspan="2" |●●●○○ (Fencing)
+|-
+! align="left"|Expression
+| colspan="2" |●●●●○ (Scholarship)
+|-
+! colspan="3" | Merits
+|-
+! align="left"| Sanctum:
+| colspan="2"|●○○○○ (Shared)
+|-
+! align="left"| High Speech:
+| colspan="2"|●○○○○ (Free)
+|-
+! align="left"|Health:
+| colspan="3"|□ □ □ □ □ □ □ □
+| 8/8
+|-
+! align="left"|Willpower:
+| colspan="3"|■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■
+|8/8
+|-
+! align="left"|Mana:
+| colspan="3"|■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ ■ □ □ □ □ □
+|7/12
+|-
+! align="left"|Wisdom:
+| colspan="3"|●●●●●●●○○○
+|7
+|-
+! align="left"|Gnosis:
+| colspan="3"|●●●○○○○○○○
+|3
+|-
+! align="left"|Defense:
+|2
+|-
+! align="left"|Initiative:
+|6
+|-
+! align="left"|Movement:
+|9
+|}
 ===Appearance===
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 ===Nimbus===
-<b>'Ancient'</b> Visual manifestations appear as scrolls of parchment, written upon with intricate scripts, obscure glyphs, and arcane diagrams. Time seems to slow down and stretch out, giving a feeling of extreme age. Surroundings appear as if undisturbed for centuries or millennia, covered with a thick layer of dust and smelling of stagnant air.
+'Ancient' Visual manifestations appear as scrolls of parchment, written upon with intricate scripts, obscure glyphs, and arcane diagrams. Time seems to slow down and stretch out, giving a feeling of extreme age. Surroundings appear as if undisturbed for centuries or millennia, covered with a thick layer of dust and smelling of stagnant air.
 ===Posessions===
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 '''Postcognition''' (Time 2, Covert) <br>
 Roll '''Intelligence + Investigation + Time''' (9 Dice)<br>
-View a replay of past events, 1 minute per casting success.
+View a replay of past events, 1 round per casting success.
 '''Shifting Sands''' (Time 3, Vulgar)<br>