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1/2 pt: Half page of flavor, or moderate structural changes. Great for filling in entries on people and places, but doesn't require a lot of thought or creativity.<br> | 1/2 pt: Half page of flavor, or moderate structural changes. Great for filling in entries on people and places, but doesn't require a lot of thought or creativity.<br> | ||
1 pt: One or two pages of flavor. Usually more labor intensive, requiring cross-referencing, and they add new information to the setting.<br> | 1 pt: One or two pages of flavor. Usually more labor intensive, requiring cross-referencing, and they add new information to the setting.<br> | ||
− | 2( ?) pts: 3 or more pages. These entries are really adventures in themselves, and go beyond character exploration into character development.<br><br> | + | 2(+?) pts: 3 or more pages. These entries are really adventures in themselves, and go beyond character exploration into character development.<br><br> |
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==Hans Andersen== | ==Hans Andersen== | ||
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# New: [[Hope in Varsi]] | # New: [[Hope in Varsi]] | ||
# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Wayward Eye of Ma-Ha-Suchi]] | # New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Wayward Eye of Ma-Ha-Suchi]] | ||
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==David Drake== | ==David Drake== | ||
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--battle of three forces, 8/12-- | --battle of three forces, 8/12-- | ||
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# New: [[Battle of Breaking Iron]] is complete (first draft). | # New: [[Battle of Breaking Iron]] is complete (first draft). | ||
--failure and intrigue, 8/20-- | --failure and intrigue, 8/20-- | ||
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# New: [[Kena]], that seductress, added. | # New: [[Kena]], that seductress, added. | ||
# New: [[The Divisions]], the list of good and bad little spirits. | # New: [[The Divisions]], the list of good and bad little spirits. | ||
--The Halls of Venus, 9/2-- | --The Halls of Venus, 9/2-- | ||
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# New: [[Scales of the Dragon]], the white jade superheavy plate. | # New: [[Scales of the Dragon]], the white jade superheavy plate. | ||
# New: [[The Halls of Venus]]. | # New: [[The Halls of Venus]]. | ||
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--The City Mastered, 9/16-- | --The City Mastered, 9/16-- | ||
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# New: [[A School For All]]: (3/4) news spreads of a school beginning operation in the Plum Blossom Retreat. | # New: [[A School For All]]: (3/4) news spreads of a school beginning operation in the Plum Blossom Retreat. | ||
# New: [[Spring Market]]: (2/2) Rivers tries to have fun (A compilation project!) | # New: [[Spring Market]]: (2/2) Rivers tries to have fun (A compilation project!) | ||
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--Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First, 9/30-- | --Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First, 9/30-- | ||
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# New: [[Chronicles of the Daybringers]]: My totally serious, dark take on what could happen when one of our teams leaves home. | # New: [[Chronicles of the Daybringers]]: My totally serious, dark take on what could happen when one of our teams leaves home. | ||
# Expanded: [[Kena]]: Once again, mostly about love, sorcery, and the relationship between Rivers and his mentor. | # Expanded: [[Kena]]: Once again, mostly about love, sorcery, and the relationship between Rivers and his mentor. | ||
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--Civil War Averted, 10/7-- | --Civil War Averted, 10/7-- | ||
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# New: [[Chapter 2]]: Gunzosha Powered Armor: Sure it's sexy, but in the summer? | # New: [[Chapter 2]]: Gunzosha Powered Armor: Sure it's sexy, but in the summer? | ||
# New: [[The Bandit King]]: As you get older, the toys just get bigger. | # New: [[The Bandit King]]: As you get older, the toys just get bigger. | ||
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--Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips, 10/21-- | --Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips, 10/21-- | ||
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# New: [[An Early Departure]] | # New: [[An Early Departure]] | ||
# New: [[Site 1: Firewander]] | # New: [[Site 1: Firewander]] | ||
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--Oops: 11/4-- | --Oops: 11/4-- | ||
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# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 5]]: Sagacious Shu Zhuang. | # New: Daybringers [[Chapter 5]]: Sagacious Shu Zhuang. | ||
# New: The [[Cerulean Sage]]: Preparing to learn a new style once snake is finished. | # New: The [[Cerulean Sage]]: Preparing to learn a new style once snake is finished. | ||
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--Faces of the Enemy (Messages and their Bearers): 12/16/06-- | --Faces of the Enemy (Messages and their Bearers): 12/16/06-- | ||
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# Expanded: [[Mayhiros Tesos]]. | # Expanded: [[Mayhiros Tesos]]. | ||
# New: Added [[Walker in Darkness]] and three of his servants as blank stubs. | # New: Added [[Walker in Darkness]] and three of his servants as blank stubs. | ||
# New: [[Typhon]]. Busy little bugger. | # New: [[Typhon]]. Busy little bugger. | ||
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--A Trial of Valor: 12/30/06-- | --A Trial of Valor: 12/30/06-- | ||
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# New: [[Crucible of Celestial Portion]]: It's River's job, so it's off screen, but that doesn't mean it's trivial. | # New: [[Crucible of Celestial Portion]]: It's River's job, so it's off screen, but that doesn't mean it's trivial. | ||
--The Consequences of Action: 1/6/07-- | --The Consequences of Action: 1/6/07-- | ||
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# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: The End and the Beginning. | # Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: The End and the Beginning. | ||
# New: [[Amilar Vondy]]: Lookshy politics have grown less subtle of late. | # New: [[Amilar Vondy]]: Lookshy politics have grown less subtle of late. | ||
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# New: [[Thorns]]: I'm not too happy with it, so I'll probably edit it, but it's a little picture of Rivers considering the city of Thorns. | # New: [[Thorns]]: I'm not too happy with it, so I'll probably edit it, but it's a little picture of Rivers considering the city of Thorns. | ||
# Edited: Collected gens Amilar under one banner. The house is at the very least neutral, as its head appears to be. | # Edited: Collected gens Amilar under one banner. The house is at the very least neutral, as its head appears to be. | ||
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==Jason Kalivas== | ==Jason Kalivas== | ||
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# (7/31) Added [[Grassfoot]] | # (7/31) Added [[Grassfoot]] | ||
# (7/31) Added [[Amilar Amaki]] | # (7/31) Added [[Amilar Amaki]] | ||
− | # (8/01) Moved River's Automata on the front page, under the [[Heaven | + | # (8/01) Moved River's Automata on the front page, under the [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#The_Book_and_the_Sword|Book and the Sword]] heading, since they're created things and not actual characters. |
# (8/01) Changed the formatting for [[An Oathsworn Circle]] to make [[River's Contacts]] stand out better. | # (8/01) Changed the formatting for [[An Oathsworn Circle]] to make [[River's Contacts]] stand out better. | ||
# (8/05) Edited David's [[Othoclase]] page, for added evil. | # (8/05) Edited David's [[Othoclase]] page, for added evil. | ||
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'''10/28: Game Day! Insults Answered''' | '''10/28: Game Day! Insults Answered''' | ||
# (10/29) Added [[Perfected Vigilance of Stone]] | # (10/29) Added [[Perfected Vigilance of Stone]] | ||
− | # (10/29) Reorganized [[Heaven | + | # (10/29) Reorganized [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] for clarity; includes moving [[My Town]] to [[Nexus]] |
# (10/29) Added [[War Games]] | # (10/29) Added [[War Games]] | ||
# (10/29) Added [[A Web Spun From Water]] | # (10/29) Added [[A Web Spun From Water]] | ||
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'''1/06: Game Day! Consequences of Action''' | '''1/06: Game Day! Consequences of Action''' | ||
# (1/07) Changed [[A Web Spun From Water]] and [[Storm's Eye Hill]] to account for more defined genders/roles in the [[The Xuan Wu Academy]] | # (1/07) Changed [[A Web Spun From Water]] and [[Storm's Eye Hill]] to account for more defined genders/roles in the [[The Xuan Wu Academy]] | ||
− | # (1/07) Created [[The Soft Breath of Seasons]] and [[Chronicle of the Cycles of Time]] to clear up [[Heaven | + | # (1/07) Created [[The Soft Breath of Seasons]] and [[Chronicle of the Cycles of Time]] to clear up [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] on the Main Page |
# (1/07) Added [[Nama Bi]] | # (1/07) Added [[Nama Bi]] | ||
# (1/07) Added "In the Dragon's Wake" to [[Storm's Eye Hill]] | # (1/07) Added "In the Dragon's Wake" to [[Storm's Eye Hill]] | ||
# (1/07) Added [[Red the Sage's Roots]] | # (1/07) Added [[Red the Sage's Roots]] | ||
# (1/07) Added pictures to [[Choshu Ishi]], [[Crumbling Pillar]], [[God Crossing]], [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]], [[Nama Bi]] and [[Red the Sage's Roots]] | # (1/07) Added pictures to [[Choshu Ishi]], [[Crumbling Pillar]], [[God Crossing]], [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]], [[Nama Bi]] and [[Red the Sage's Roots]] | ||
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==Lukas Myhan== | ==Lukas Myhan== | ||
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-- 8/12: Battle of Three Forces | -- 8/12: Battle of Three Forces | ||
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# (8/20): Added [[The Well of Roots]] | # (8/20): Added [[The Well of Roots]] | ||
# (8/20): Added [[Lun Kuai's Letter]] | # (8/20): Added [[Lun Kuai's Letter]] | ||
-- 8/20: Failure and Intrigue | -- 8/20: Failure and Intrigue | ||
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# (9/02): Added two sections to [[Allat]] | # (9/02): Added two sections to [[Allat]] | ||
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--9/16: The City Mastered | --9/16: The City Mastered | ||
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# (9/25): Added [[Tokaki Kui]] | # (9/25): Added [[Tokaki Kui]] | ||
# (9/29): Contributed last 4 paragraphs to [[The First Generation]] | # (9/29): Contributed last 4 paragraphs to [[The First Generation]] | ||
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-- 9/30: Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First | -- 9/30: Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First | ||
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# (10/06): Added [[Iselsi Augus]] | # (10/06): Added [[Iselsi Augus]] | ||
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# (1/11): Added [[Juggernaut]] | # (1/11): Added [[Juggernaut]] | ||
# (1/11): Added [[Something to Break]] | # (1/11): Added [[Something to Break]] | ||
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# (10/20) Added Part One (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background) | # (10/20) Added Part One (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background) | ||
# (10/28) Added Part Two (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background) | # (10/28) Added Part Two (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background) | ||
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'''12/16 Game Day! Messages and Their Bearers''' | '''12/16 Game Day! Messages and Their Bearers''' | ||
# Working on [[The Price You Pay]] | # Working on [[The Price You Pay]] | ||
# Working on Part Three | # Working on Part Three | ||
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[[Heaven's Mandate]] | [[Heaven's Mandate]] |