Editing Talk:Heaven's Mandate

Howdy exalts.  Anyway, I thought that we could post here about what we actually did to the site so that we can easily see what kind of new material has been posted.  Related changes just doesn't cut it.  So, post your latest adds, starting with what you've posted since the last session.  

Exp scale (subject to extreme fudging):<br>
1/2 pt: Half page of flavor, or moderate structural changes.  Great for filling in entries on people and places, but doesn't require a lot of thought or creativity.<br>
1 pt: One or two pages of flavor.  Usually more labor intensive, requiring cross-referencing, and they add new information to the setting.<br>
2(+?) pts: 3 or more pages.  These entries are really adventures in themselves, and go beyond character exploration into character development.<br><br>


==Hans Andersen==

# New: [[Special Training for the Marukan First Legion]]
# New: [[A Tea Ceremony, Interrupted]]

(10/27) Bad news for tea-lovers everywhere.

# New: [[Crossroads of Tea and Karma]], and an Epilogue: [[The Reprimand]]
# New: Stub entries for Nameless Ravine's father's two Monkey Bodyguards, [[Raging Panda]] (kohai) and [[Leaf-Catcher]] (sempai)
# New: Stub entry for [[Charms of Apotheosis]]

(10/28-10/29) Some post-game follow-up:

# New: An [[Unexpected Theology Lesson]] for the Marukan First Legion
# New: The Litany of Inferior [[Marukan Regional Teas]]
# New: Finale:  [[The Bureaucrat and the Deity]]

(11/07) Oops.  Some consequences.

# New: Unity of Nightmares, [[Act 1: Curtain Call]]
# Coming Soon:  Acts 2-5, plus an intermission.  I'll put these on their own page once they're done.

(11/09) Daybringers Fanfic.  Heaven help us all.  (Servants of the Righteous, Part 1)

# New: Chronicles of the Daybringers, [[Gaiden 3.5]]
# New: Renamed "Unity of Nightmares" to "Nameless Ravine's Nightmare".  Added [[Act 2: Boameth and the Fox]]

(11/13-11/16) Stone Bone Trees.  (Servants of the Righteous, Part 2)

# New: The lead-in for [[Shai Mei]]'s entry got out of hand and turned into its own tale: [[Gaiden 5.6]]: Marta's many tools.  Shai Mei's own entry remains blank...
# New: Entry for [[Shai Mei]].  Needless to say, it features rampant tree-philosophy.
# Updated: [[Reforging the Promise]].  Added the results of the first post-reforging test-run.
# New: [[Intermission: Rivers and Spoilers]]
# New: [[Act 5: Fifteenth Son Shatters the River]]
# Updated: [[Raging Panda]] teaches Nameless Ravine a new charm.
# New: [[Rededicating the Promise]], with a cameo from SSW

(12/21) The Faces of The Enemy (Messages and their Bearers)

# New: [[Clearfield]]
# New: [[Amilar Agathon]]
# Updated: Soho gives us a guided tour of the completely remodelled [[Flying Pearl Lake]]

(12/30) Staring Into the Abyss (A Trial of Valor)

# New: Poor [[Soho]] doesn't have his own entry yet, but he does guest-star in [[Gaiden 6.5]]: Unlikely Sifu, Unlikely Student
# Updated: [[Sha Yan Shi]] - Added "Part 3: The Calm Before..."
# New: [[Act 4: Torrent of Woe]].
# Coming soon: The (chronologically challenged) nightmare sequence concludes with [[Act 3: Darkest Before the Dawn]]

(1/9) Angry Angry Deathlord (The Consequences of Action)

# New: [[Four Farewells]] - The first part of Nameless Ravine's adventures between the end of the SSW arc and whatever comes next
# New: [[Hope in Varsi]]
# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Wayward Eye of Ma-Ha-Suchi]]

(1/14) Beneath Open Skies  (The Righteous Strike Back)

# New: [[Thirsty Soku and the Righteous Man]]
# New: [[The Prison of Oaken Rebuke]]
# New: [[Soho]] finally has a short entry.  I think I'll need to play him in game to get a feel for him before he gets some serious adventures of his own.

(1/21) Phoenix Rebirth (Distant Peals of Thunder)

# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Monkey-Picked Messenger]].  I'm enjoying this *way* too much.
# New: [[The Fivefold Chronology]] - Intended as a list of every entry, arranged in game-world chronological order (regardless of author and date of composition), cross-referenced by subplot.  Lots of cleanup and formatting and typo-fixing yet to do.  There's almost certainly chronology errors in there as well.  Also, someone else should volunteer to add in-game calendar dates to the session-headings.
# Updated: [[The Fivefold Chronology]] - Fixed the broken links, and added commentary about the ordering scheme.  Added a link off of the main page.

(2/11) Meanwhile... (Darkening Skies)

# New: [[The Second Southern Expedition]] - Added Part 1: "Not One Tiger Warrior"
# Updated: [[The Second Southern Expedition]] - Added "A Conspiracy of Virtue"
# Updated: [[The Second Southern Expedition]] - Added "No Man's Land".  I'm tempted break this tale into multiple pages, in which case "No Man's Land" will probably be reclassified as "Daybringers Gaiden 7.5: What Might have Been".  If for no reason other than to goad David into finishing DB8.  Curse you Hans!
# The Chronology-monkeys have been busy; the Second Southern Expedition has been split into [[Not One Tiger Warrior]], [[A Conspiracy of Virtue]], and [[Gaiden 7.5]], with more coming soon.
# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Mandate of Heaven]] - Best. Topic. Title. EVAR.
# New: [[Powder Kegs (and other delicate matters)]]


==David Drake==
# Edit: [[The Vitreous Fulcrum]] now includes changes after the last battle.
# New: road system described under [[Eye of Hiparkes]].
# New: town at the center of the Eye of Hiparkes: [[God Crossing]].
# New: Automata section begun with [[The Gardener]].
# New: Flavor text for [[Selenn]], Nathan's mother, added to the contacts for Rivers.
# New: Flavor text for [[Salvar]], Nathan's brother, added to contacts for Rivers.
# New: Flavor text for [[Othoclase]], gemlord.

--battle of three forces, 8/12--
# New: [[Battle of Breaking Iron]] is complete (first draft).

--failure and intrigue, 8/20--
# New: [[Kena]], that seductress, added.
# New: [[The Divisions]], the list of good and bad little spirits.

--The Halls of Venus, 9/2--
# New: [[Scales of the Dragon]], the white jade superheavy plate.
# New: [[The Halls of Venus]].
# New: [[Chehbraterazim]], a sobeksis of the grey river.
# Expanded: [[Salvar]].

--The City Mastered, 9/16--
# New: [[A School For All]]: (3/4) news spreads of a school beginning operation in the Plum Blossom Retreat.
# New: [[Spring Market]]: (2/2) Rivers tries to have fun (A compilation project!)
# New: [[Serpent Swords]]: (3/3) Irrational Hope and Unbreakable Faith.
# New: [[The First Generation]]: (2/2) Power and Humanity: the first three amalgams.

--Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First, 9/30--
# New: [[Chronicles of the Daybringers]]: My totally serious, dark take on what could happen when one of our teams leaves home.
# Expanded: [[Kena]]: Once again, mostly about love, sorcery, and the relationship between Rivers and his mentor.
# New: [[Chapter 1]]: Carnage!  Slaughter!  We're ready for those things, but can we get a room for the night?
# New: [[Pai and Pei]]: River's assistants.
# New: [[Lyssa]]: Liaison to the Infinite City.
# New: [[Under Bridges]]: River's horse, one of Murakan's finest.

--Civil War Averted, 10/7--
# New: [[Chapter 2]]: Gunzosha Powered Armor: Sure it's sexy, but in the summer?
# New: [[The Bandit King]]: As you get older, the toys just get bigger.
# New: [[Chapter 3]]: Why you don't mess with Yao Ye.
# New: [[Blood Like Sparks]]: Yet another... enemy?
# New: [[The Southern Expedition]]: Doomed souls struggling for the light.  2 quick sections.
# Expanded: [[God Crossing]]: On Rivers' day off, the city's planning must continue.

--Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips, 10/21--
# New: [[An Early Departure]]
# New: [[Site 1: Firewander]]
# New: [[Site 2: Rathess]]
# New: [[Site 3: Diamond Hearth]]
# New: [[Site 4: An Teng]]
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 4]] Melee in the streets of Varsi?<br>
# New: [[Gatehouse of the Five Winds]]: Fleets.
# New: [[Panoply of the Sun]]: I started it, but it's going to take a beastload of work.  Check it out!
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: A quick section added.
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: Another quick section added.

--Oops: 11/4--
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 5]]: Sagacious Shu Zhuang.
# New: The [[Cerulean Sage]]: Preparing to learn a new style once snake is finished.
# Expanded: Expansion to [[Marta]]: Part 1 of SSW intros, (the test).
# Expanded: [[The Halls of Venus]]: Part 2 of SSW intros.
# New: [[Unity of Dreams]]: Part 3 of SSW intros.
# New: [[Seven Season's Widow]]: An entry of her own. (revised to reflect her lack of athletics).
# Expanded: [[Berren]]: More description of life in God Crossing, with further Lookshy scheming.
# New: [[Gaiden 5.5]]: Lu Fei, Seraph of the Burning Bastion.
# New: Daybringers [[Chapter 6]]: Where has the sun gone?
# New: [[Reforging the Promise]]
# New: [[Mite Xu]]: just to add a little flavor to our amalgamated servants.
# New: [[Lu Fei]]: Detailing a bit about Lu Fei's bad luck and his present situation.
# New: Expansion of Lu Fei to include the letter requesting amabassadorial status.

--Faces of the Enemy (Messages and their Bearers): 12/16/06--
# Expanded: [[Mayhiros Tesos]].
# New: Added [[Walker in Darkness]] and three of his servants as blank stubs.
# New: [[Typhon]].  Busy little bugger.

--A Trial of Valor: 12/30/06--
# New: [[Crucible of Celestial Portion]]: It's River's job, so it's off screen, but that doesn't mean it's trivial.

--The Consequences of Action: 1/6/07--
# Expanded: [[The Southern Expedition]]: The End and the Beginning.
# New: [[Amilar Vondy]]: Lookshy politics have grown less subtle of late.
# New: [[Chapter 7]]: Still More Day to Bring, with an appearance by the newest Daybringer.
# New: [[Thorns]]: I'm not too happy with it, so I'll probably edit it, but it's a little picture of Rivers considering the city of Thorns.
# Edited: Collected gens Amilar under one banner.  The house is at the very least neutral, as its head appears to be.

--The Righteous Strike Back: 1/13/07--
# New: [[Open Skies Above]]: Sorry, you're not invited, but you can still send gifts.  Hearthstones are preferred.
# New: [[Putting Out Fires]]: Rivers and Skies and busting heads.
# New: [[Falling Bridges]]: Reconstruction in the south, and moderate angst, deflected by Mite Xu.
# New: [[Shadow of a Different Sun]]: Rock and a hard place.
# New: [[Responsibility and Authority]]: Happy endings.
# Expanded: [[Rivers Between Us]]
# New: [[The Headless]]: Pity Wu.

--Distant Peals of Thunder: 1/20/07--
# New: [[Applications of Enlightenment]]: New page for organizing custom charms, since 1/2 of the players have them.  
# New: [[Defy the Armor's Dream]]: Posted the one custom charm that I have in full (I don't have the virtue listed for the spirit charms you sent me, Jason.  Sorry!)
# Edited: [[The Fivefold Chronology]]: Added dates as far back as I have them recorded as gm.

--Wind in the Doorway: 1/27/07--
# Expanded: [[Solar-Forged Glories]]: Added a couple of the artifacts from last session.
# Picture: [[Sun-Blackened Pinions]]: Crane.
# Expanded: [[Rivers Between Us]]: Tossed up his intimacies for funsies.

--Darkening Skies: 2/10/07--
# New: [[Secret Avalanche]] gets his own page.  I wish I could have written it... without the crappy writing.
# New: [[Root of the East]], Rivers' trusted advisor.  Poor devil.


==Jason Kalivas==

Good plan, David!

# (7/30) Added [[The Xuan Wu Academy]]
# (7/30) Added [[Pagoda of Infinite Strategy]]
# (7/30) Added [[The Dryads]]
# (7/31) Added [[Grassfoot]]
# (7/31) Added [[Amilar Amaki]]
# (8/01) Moved River's Automata on the front page, under the [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#The_Book_and_the_Sword|Book and the Sword]] heading, since they're created things and not actual characters.  
# (8/01) Changed the formatting for [[An Oathsworn Circle]] to make [[River's Contacts]] stand out better.
# (8/05) Edited David's [[Othoclase]] page, for added evil.
# (8/05) Added a second section to the [[Grassfoot]] page.
# (8/06) Edited [[Pagoda of Infinite Strategy]] to add a shrine and a way of signalling others.
# (8/06) Edited [[God Crossing]] for logic, clarity and more added evil.

'''8/12: Game Day!  Battle of Three Forces'''
# (8/14) Added a second section to [[The Dryads]].
# (8/17) Added [[Lookshy]].
# (8/17) Added [[Mayhiros Tesos]].
# (8/19) Added a second section to [[Fear's Umbra]].

'''8/20: Game Day!  Failure and Intrigue'''
# (8/26) Listed all of the Mask's known Abyssals on [[Sky-Spanning Devils]].
# (8/26) Added [[Mayhiros Ruja]].
# (8/26) Added [[Rhianna]].

'''9/2: Game Day!  The Halls of Venus'''
# (9/4) Added [[The Mourning Field]]
# (9/4) Added [[Flying Pearl Lake]]
# (9/8) Added "At the Altar of Storms" to [[Shouting With Iron]]
# (9/9) Added [[Soft the Valley's Song]]

'''9/16: Game Day!  The City Mastered'''
# (9/17) Added [[Hiparkes' Mirror]]
# (9/17) Added [[Sohei Reinforcement Armor]]
# (9/18) Added [[Ma-Ha-Suchi]]
# (9/18) Added a picture of the [[Pagoda of Infinite Strategy]]
# (9/24) Began [[Abbot of Hunger and Dust]]

'''9/30: Game Day!  Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First'''
# (10/02) Finished [[Abbot of Hunger and Dust]]
# (10/02) Added [[V'Neef Pahul]]
# (10/06) Added "The Living Voice of Ami Kang" to [[The_Qinglong_Alliance]]
# (10/07) Added "Storm of Amber" to [[Spring Market]]

'''10/07: Game Day!  Civil War Averted'''
# (10/08) Added [[Storm's Eye Hill]]
# (10/08) Added [[Fenghuang Temple]], Part 1
# (10/11) Added [[Fenghuang Temple]], Part 2
# (10/14) Added [[Deren's Ford]]
# (10/15) Added [[Puyo]]
# (10/15) Added [[Karacalla]]
# (10/17) Added [[Varsi]], Part 1

'''10/21: Game Day! Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips'''
# (10/22) Added "Fire in the Rain" to [[The Zhuque Brotherhood]]

'''10/28: Game Day! Insults Answered'''
# (10/29) Added [[Perfected Vigilance of Stone]]
# (10/29) Reorganized [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] for clarity; includes moving [[My Town]] to [[Nexus]]
# (10/29) Added [[War Games]]
# (10/29) Added [[A Web Spun From Water]]
# (11/02) Added [[The Marukan Alliance]] - FINALLY!
# (11/04) Added [[Crumbling Pillar]]
# (11/04) Added [[The Trials of Righteous Judgement]]

'''11/04: Game Day! Oops'''
# (11/04) Reorganized [[Heaven's Mandate]] for clarity - breaking off larger sections into self-contained pages
# (11/05) Added [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]]
# (11/19) Added [[Perfected Tears Upon Alabaster Sorrow]]
# (11/19) Added [[Weeping Jade]]
# (11/19) Added [[Black Caul Chiurgeons]]

'''12/16: Game Day! Faces of the Enemy (Messages and their Bearers)'''
# (12/17) Added Part 1 to [[The Qilin Fellowship]]

'''12/30: Game Day!  A Trial of Valor'''
# (12/31) Added "The Forge's New Master" to the [[Flame-bond Forge]]
# (12/31) Added [[Choshu Ishi]]
# (12/31) Added "Insolence" to [[The Qilin Fellowship]]

'''1/06: Game Day!  Consequences of Action'''
# (1/07) Changed [[A Web Spun From Water]] and [[Storm's Eye Hill]] to account for more defined genders/roles in the [[The Xuan Wu Academy]]
# (1/07) Created [[The Soft Breath of Seasons]] and [[Chronicle of the Cycles of Time]] to clear up [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] on the Main Page
# (1/07) Added [[Nama Bi]]
# (1/07) Added "In the Dragon's Wake" to [[Storm's Eye Hill]]
# (1/07) Added [[Red the Sage's Roots]]
# (1/07) Added pictures to [[Choshu Ishi]], [[Crumbling Pillar]], [[God Crossing]], [[Prince Resplendent in the Ruin of Ages]], [[Nama Bi]] and [[Red the Sage's Roots]]

'''1/13: Game Day!  The Righteous Strike Back!'''
# (1/15) Added "Singular Geomancy" to [[Storm's Eye Hill]]; in which I try, and fail, to get maudlin
# (1/16) Added [[The Crow and Cloud Formation]]
# (1/17) Added "Lightning Disperses the Clouds" to [[The Crow and Cloud Formation]]
# (1/18) Added "The Crow Plucks the Corpse's Eye" to [[The Crow and Cloud Formation]]
# (1/19) Added "The Formation Triumphs" to [[The Crow and Cloud Formation]]
# (1/19) Added [[Scattered Hoof-beats Sound]]

'''1/20: Game Day!  Distant Peals of Thunder'''
# (1/24) Added [[The Righteous Stair]]

'''1/27: Game Day! Wind in the Doorway'''
# (1/28) Added [[Choshu Aya]].
# (2/05) Added Intimacies for [[Storm of Amber]], [[Sweet Voice of Brass and Glory]], [[Cathak Nekuto]], [[Choshu Ishi]] and [[Choshu Aya]]; Storm's are complete, the rest still have some to add, in time.
# (2/05) Added [[Strategies For Mountains and Valleys]]
# (2/05) Edited [[Scattered Hoof-beats Sound]] to improve the quality.
# (2/08) Added [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]].
# (2/08) Added [[House of Courage]].
# (2/08) Added "In Mountains, Occupy the Heights" to [[Strategies For Mountains and Valleys]].

'''2/10: Game Day! Darkening Skies'''
# (2/11) Added "In Valleys, Deploy for Defense" to [[Strategies For Mountains and Valleys]].
# (2/11) Added the [[Pearl of Castigation]] to our hearthstones.
# (2/15) Added [[The Five Changes of Fire]]

'''2/17: Game Day!  Sapphire's Bad Day'''
# (2/17) Added [[Voices Prophesying War]]
# (2/18) Added "The Answer to the Earth" to [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]]; anyone who gets the joke gets mad props from me.
# (2/18) Added "The Red Queen" to [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]]
#


==Lukas Myhan==
-- 8/12: Battle of Three Forces
# (8/20): Added [[The Well of Roots]]
# (8/20): Added [[Lun Kuai's Letter]]

-- 8/20: Failure and Intrigue
# (9/02): Added two sections to [[Allat]]

-- 9/2: The Halls of Venus

--9/16: The City Mastered
# (9/25): Added [[Tokaki Kui]]
# (9/29): Contributed last 4 paragraphs to [[The First Generation]]
# (9/30): Contributed Leaf Shakes the Wind's section of [[Spring Market]]

-- 9/30: Lookshy Strikes Back... err... First
# (10/06): Added [[Iselsi Augus]]

-- 10/07: Civil War Averted
# (10/11): Added [[A Lesson In Humility]]
# (10/16): Added [[Subaru Mao]]

-- 10/21: Usurpation and Betrayal: Bloody Roots, Bloody Lips

-- 10/28: Insults Answered
# (11/01): Added "A Matter of Interpretation" to [[Site 1: Firewander]]
# (11/01): Added Leaf's Journal Entry to [[An Early Departure]]
# (11/01): Co-wrote "Trust" in [[Site 4: An Teng]] with David
# (11/02): Added "Old Allies" and Leaf's Journal Entry to [[Site 2: Rathess]]
# (11/02): Added Leaf's Journal Entry to [[Site 3: Diamond Hearth]]
# (11/02): Added [[Bones Like Jade]]
# (11/02): Added [[Bones Like Jade: Stats]]
# (11/03): Added "Duty" to [[Site 3: Diamond Hearth]]
# (11/03): Added "Perspective" to [[An Early Departure]]
# (11/03): Added Leaf's Journal Entry to [[Site 4: An Teng]]
# (11/03): Added [[Sun-Blackened Pinions]]
# (11/03): Added [[Alabaster Sunset]]
# (11/03): Added Black Widow Razors, Sling of Deadly Prowess, Hearthstone Bracers, and Amulet of Shadow Walking to [[Panoply of the Sun]]
# (11/04): Added [[The Assassin's Library]]

-- 11/04: Oops!
# (11/15): Added "Twofold" to [[The Empty Garden]]
# (11/21): Added "Part 1: Arrival" to [[Sha Yan Shi]]

-- (12/16): Faces of the Enemy
# (12/28): Added "Part 2: The Pen Is Mightier..." to [[Sha Yan Shi]]

-- (1/06): The Consequences of Action
# (1/11): Added [[Juggernaut]]
# (1/11): Added [[Something to Break]]

-- (1/13): The Righteous Strike Back
# (1/19): Added [[Chain of Regrets]]


== Joe Jay-Dixon ==

10/17: Added four Abyssals to the Mask's roster, from a discussion on RPGnet.


==Lesley McKeever==

'''10/07: Game Day!  Civil War Averted'''
# (10/16) Added a new enemy, [[Virra Amalia]] 
# (10/20) Added Part One (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background)
# (10/28) Added Part Two (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background)

'''12/16 Game Day! Messages and Their Bearers'''
# Working on [[The Price You Pay]]
# Working on Part Three

'''1/20 Game Day! Distant Peals of Thunder'''
# New: Sapphire's Stats are [[Sapphire River at Midnight|here]]
# Updated: Edited [[Hearthstones]] to add Sapphire's hearthstones
# Updated: Edited [[Solar-Forged Glories]] to add Sapphire's artifacts

'''2/10 Game Day! Darkening Skies'''
# Updated: Edited [[Sapphire River at Midnight|Sapphire's stats]]
# Updated: Added Charms spreadsheet [http://www.lesleymac.com/ex/exaltcharms.xls here]
# Updated: Part Two of [[Sapphire's Past]] edited extensively
# New: Added Hsuan Lin's [[Hsuan Lin|stats]]


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[[Heaven's Mandate]]
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 /2 pt: Half page of flavor, or moderate structural changes.  Great for filling in entries on people and places, but doesn't require a lot of thought or creativity.<br>
 pt: One or two pages of flavor.  Usually more labor intensive, requiring cross-referencing, and they add new information to the setting.<br>
-( ?) pts: 3 or more pages.  These entries are really adventures in themselves, and go beyond character exploration into character development.<br><br>
+(+?) pts: 3 or more pages.  These entries are really adventures in themselves, and go beyond character exploration into character development.<br><br>
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 # Updated: [[The Second Southern Expedition]] - Added "No Man's Land".  I'm tempted break this tale into multiple pages, in which case "No Man's Land" will probably be reclassified as "Daybringers Gaiden 7.5: What Might have Been".  If for no reason other than to goad David into finishing DB8.  Curse you Hans!
 # The Chronology-monkeys have been busy; the Second Southern Expedition has been split into [[Not One Tiger Warrior]], [[A Conspiracy of Virtue]], and [[Gaiden 7.5]], with more coming soon.
-(2/17) Meanwhile... (Sapphire's Bad Day)
 # New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Mandate of Heaven]] - Best. Topic. Title. EVAR.
 # New: [[Powder Kegs (and other delicate matters)]]
-# New: [[Divine Intervention]] - Fun with evil, evil, evil cliffhangers;  You are a horrible, horrible man, Hans Christian Andersen. :)  -  JK
-# New: [[Hurry Home, Sweet Voice]] - The funny part is, Jason, there was only a ninety-minute window of truly-evil cliffhanger-dom before I posted this next part.  Not that there's any real resolution, but still.
-# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Law of the Pack]] - The problem with being a half-caste in a full-moon world is that you have to deal with... another Evil, Evil, Cliffhanger!  Mwa ha ha! ''She '''''did not''''' just say "In the name of the Moon, I will punish you"...?! -mac''
-# New: [[Sha Yan Shi and the Long Dark Night]] - What?  No cliffhanger?  Inconceivable!
-# New: [[Agathon's Findings]] - I wrote this ages ago to explore the events that brought Agathon into disgrace in Lookshy, but forgot to post it.  With Marta's wedding and Soho's impending trial, it's suddenly quite relevant.  ''You know that nothing links to it right now but this Talk page, right?  :) - JK''  (''Yeah, posted it this morning before work.  Haven't yet decided the best place to put it... okay, Agathon's entry links to it now. - HCA'')
-# Updated:  [[The Fivefold Chronology]] - Added the last several sessions' worth of entries.  The simian scribes were uncertain of the timing of some of them, particularly Jason's works.
-(2/24) Secret Teachings of Secret Avalanche (Going to Ground)
-# New: [[Gaiden 7.6]]: Soho no baka! - This was going to be the last entry in the Second Southern Expedition, but then it got melodramatic enough that I was forced to reclassify it as Daybringers Gaiden.  Such a shame that I couldn't number it 8.5.  ''(goad, goad!  -HCA)''  Can something really count as Daybringers' Gaiden if it doesn't actually contain any reference to the Daybringers? - JK  (Crap, I *knew* I forgot a crucial detail.  Expect an edit sometime soon.)
-# New: [[Peleps Deled's Vault]] - [[Storm of Amber]] is not the only exalt seeking the Third-Arm Glaive...
-(3/10) A Long-Awaited Party (?)
-# New: [[Shai Mei's Place]] - The Little Tree vanquishes a nasty hangover...
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 # New: [[Secret Avalanche]] gets his own page.  I wish I could have written it... without the crappy writing.
 # New: [[Root of the East]], Rivers' trusted advisor.  Poor devil.
---Cloud Break: 3/10/07--
-# New: [[Chapter 8]]: At last.  So many double meanings it will take eight fully independent and flurry-able simultaneous actions to shake a stick at them!
---Tree Hunting: 3/17/07--
-# Expanded: [[Cerulean Sage]]: Decided he should really be a divinity, and then brought him in to start teaching Rivers.
-# Added: [[Outside the Bear's Cave]]: The next story will begin soon.  You are ready.  Are they?
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 # (7/31) Added [[Grassfoot]]
 # (7/31) Added [[Amilar Amaki]]
-# (8/01) Moved River's Automata on the front page, under the [[Heaven's_Mandate#The_Book_and_the_Sword|Book and the Sword]] heading, since they're created things and not actual characters.
+# (8/01) Moved River's Automata on the front page, under the [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#The_Book_and_the_Sword|Book and the Sword]] heading, since they're created things and not actual characters.
 # (8/01) Changed the formatting for [[An Oathsworn Circle]] to make [[River's Contacts]] stand out better.
 # (8/05) Edited David's [[Othoclase]] page, for added evil.
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 '''10/28: Game Day! Insults Answered'''
 # (10/29) Added [[Perfected Vigilance of Stone]]
-# (10/29) Reorganized [[Heaven's_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] for clarity; includes moving [[My Town]] to [[Nexus]]
+# (10/29) Reorganized [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] for clarity; includes moving [[My Town]] to [[Nexus]]
 # (10/29) Added [[War Games]]
 # (10/29) Added [[A Web Spun From Water]]
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 '''1/06: Game Day!  Consequences of Action'''
 # (1/07) Changed [[A Web Spun From Water]] and [[Storm's Eye Hill]] to account for more defined genders/roles in the [[The Xuan Wu Academy]]
-# (1/07) Created [[The Soft Breath of Seasons]] and [[Chronicle of the Cycles of Time]] to clear up [[Heaven's_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] on the Main Page
+# (1/07) Created [[The Soft Breath of Seasons]] and [[Chronicle of the Cycles of Time]] to clear up [[Heaven%27s_Mandate#Records_of_the_Grand_Historian|Records of the Grand Historian]] on the Main Page
 # (1/07) Added [[Nama Bi]]
 # (1/07) Added "In the Dragon's Wake" to [[Storm's Eye Hill]]
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 # (2/18) Added "The Answer to the Earth" to [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]]; anyone who gets the joke gets mad props from me.
 # (2/18) Added "The Red Queen" to [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]]
-# (2/20) Added "Two Ladies and a Legion of Brass" to [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]]; feedback especially appreciated on this one, I'm not sure how I feel about the writing. ''I liked it. Although...are you sure you can't work in a truly heinous cliffhanger ending? -mac''
-# (2/20) Rewrote ""Two Ladies and a Legion of Brass" on [[Three Visits For the Brass Lady]], for added bureaucracy; I'm much, much happier with this version
-# (2/20) Added [[Tactics For Hosts and Guests]], thus initiating the final chapter in the first Choshu Ishi story; tales of his exploits in the south remain to be heard.
-# (2/23) Rewrote [[Tactics For Hosts and Guests]].  Sorry, I'm feeling a bit perfectionistic this week.
-'''2/24: Game Day!  Going to Ground'''
-# (2/25) Added "On Home Ground, Initiate No Action" to [[Tactics For Hosts and Guests]].
-# (2/25) Added "On Foreign Ground, Strike Deep" to [[Tactics For Hosts and Guests]].
-# (2/27) Added [[Hidden Riches]].  I feel bad for Choshu Ishi.  Really I do.
-# (3/02) Added [[Choshu Ishi Versus The Zombies]]
-# (3/02) Added "Night of the Living Dead" to [[Choshu Ishi Versus The Zombies]]; in which the Ivory Dragon finally gets some respect.
-'''3/03: Game Day! '''
-# (3/08) Added [[A Two-Stone Game]]
-# (3/09) Added [[The Fate of Flowers in the Mirror]]
-'''4/07: Game Day! '''
-# (4/12) Added [[Mayhiros Xenon]]
-# (4/12) Added [[The Oath of the Glaive]]
-'''5/26: Game Day! '''
-# (9/16) Added [[Seeking the Stallion-Lord's Shelter]]
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 # (10/20) Added Part One (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background)
 # (10/28) Added Part Two (of [[Sapphire River at Midnight]]'s background)
 '''12/16 Game Day! Messages and Their Bearers'''
 # Working on [[The Price You Pay]]
 # Working on Part Three
 '''1/20 Game Day! Distant Peals of Thunder'''
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 # Updated: Edited [[Hearthstones]] to add Sapphire's hearthstones
 # Updated: Edited [[Solar-Forged Glories]] to add Sapphire's artifacts
 '''2/10 Game Day! Darkening Skies'''
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 # Updated: Part Two of [[Sapphire's Past]] edited extensively
 # New: Added Hsuan Lin's [[Hsuan Lin|stats]]
-'''2/17 Game Day! Sapphire's Bad Day'''<br/>
-''Honestly, sometimes I wonder if anyone likes anything they write.''
-<br/>This week, it is my intention to finish at least three articles and add them to the wiki. Wish me luck! and/or mock me mercilessly should I fail.<br/>
-# New: it will be called [[Walls and Tall Shadows]]
-# New: it will be called [[Sapphire's Bad Day]]
-# New: it will be called [[A Gift of Blades]]
-# Updated: Finished spending Hsuan Lin's banked exp and updated her [[Hsuan Lin|stats]]
-# Updated: Edited several articles, mainly to make character names fit convention
-# Updated: Changed the structure of things. "Sapphire's Past" is now located off of her character [[Sapphire River at Midnight|page]]. Also, each section of her past has its own page now. That thing was getting long, and I'm only about half done.
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