Editing The Great Commorragh Campaign/Heskill

Heskill is a young kabalite who resents those above him, throughout his life the trueborn have insulted and demeaned him, but he knows that one day they will come to regret it. He is working on slowly clawing his way to the top.
Skills
Arena 3
Awareness 10
Commerce 3
Courtesy 10^
Common Lore 5
Demolotion 3
Fashion 2
First Aid 10
Flirting 5
Forbidden Lore 2
Gaming 8
Heraldry 3
Hunting 2
Infiltration 8
Intrigue 15^^
Kin Lore 9^++
Medicae 0
Navigate 5
Orate 10^
Perform 3
Recognize 5++
Scholastic Lore 2
Tech-Use 5
Trade 3
Wrangling 2

Combat Skills
Battle 15^
Seige 0
Captain 6+++
Skyboard 5
Skimmer 13*^
Jetbike 1
Flyer 0
Voidship 2 ++
Blade 10
Heavy 5
Flexible 2
Spear 5
Brawl 10*
Pistol 8
Assault 5
Rifle 15^
Support 8*
Gunnery 5


Religious Traits
Vengeful, Selfish, Suspicious, Worldly, Indulgent
Bonus HEAL +2

Starting Passions
Honor 12
Fear (Archon) 15
Loyalty (Kabal) 15
Hospitality 15
Contempt (lessers) 12
Hate (choose one) 12

SIZ 9
DEX 16
STR 8
CON 9
APP: 21
* raised as special Skill
^raised in the normal way
+ added a single point

Cruel Demise: When own ranged attack causes Kill, MW, or failed Valor.

derived stats
Damage: 3
Major Wound: 9
Stun: 9
Hit Points: 18
Move: 16
Parry: 8 

Servants: 
Old Knights: 1
Middle Age Knights: 0
Young Knights: 6
Others: 11
Levy: 49