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The pressure in training escalated by the day, the training staff trying to force Iskander to quit, but he stubbornly ground on. One day he was badly beaten by a fellow student who had discovered their Tide attunement and was able to redirect Iskander's own attacks against him. It was while lying in the infirmary that he first saw the ghost of Kim Lee Bien, an elemental master from the Dawn War. Master Kim promised to show him how to kindle his elemental attunement without sorcery, though he was clear the likelihood of success was based entirely on how hard the student practised. Kim was a harsh instructor, far worse than those at the Iron Bastion and liked to use pain to punctuate his teaching points. However, his methods worked, Iskander began to feel the elemental flows and shape them with his will. No one else could see Master Kim, and thus the blossoming elemental power in the once backward student was a mystery to all.
 
The pressure in training escalated by the day, the training staff trying to force Iskander to quit, but he stubbornly ground on. One day he was badly beaten by a fellow student who had discovered their Tide attunement and was able to redirect Iskander's own attacks against him. It was while lying in the infirmary that he first saw the ghost of Kim Lee Bien, an elemental master from the Dawn War. Master Kim promised to show him how to kindle his elemental attunement without sorcery, though he was clear the likelihood of success was based entirely on how hard the student practised. Kim was a harsh instructor, far worse than those at the Iron Bastion and liked to use pain to punctuate his teaching points. However, his methods worked, Iskander began to feel the elemental flows and shape them with his will. No one else could see Master Kim, and thus the blossoming elemental power in the once backward student was a mystery to all.
  
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Kim also taught martial techniques once common in the Dawn Age that had died out in this Zenith Age, as well as some esoteric powers that had not been used in over a century. Iskander flourished in his training thanks to his ghostly mentor. With his graduation into the ranks of the knights, Master Kim did not disappear, he still visits Iskander whenever it suits him, questioning, making requests, occasionally demonstrating some new higher technique. It is still unclear exactly what Master Kim's agenda is.
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Kim also taught martial techniques more common in the Dawn Age that had died out in this Zenith Age, as well as some esoteric powers that had not been used in over a century. Iskander flourished in his training thanks to his ghostly mentor. With his graduation into the ranks of the knights, Master Kim did not disappear, he still visits Iskander whenever it suits him, questioning, making requests, occasionally demonstrating some new higher technique. It is still unclear exactly what Master Kim's agenda is.
  
  

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