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They still waved regular, though.
 
They still waved regular, though.
  
But her sparring was now mostly with off-grid spacers who thought they could stiff her for her services because she looked like a tattered bit that might get sucked into an air vent if she walked to close. With any luck, the ship she had just signed on with would offer better opportunities.
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But her sparring was now mostly with off-grid spacers who thought they could stiff her for her services because she looked like a tattered scrap of a girl. With any luck, the ship she had just signed on with would offer better opportunities.
  
 
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