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Not that Daniel knew this, because as helpful as Danli, it was surpassed by his shyness. During the day he'd hide in a dark corner, hidden behind a barrel, sleeping invisibly until the sun went down and Daniel stopped grinding for the day.  Then and only then would Danli sneak out to perform his chores.
 
Not that Daniel knew this, because as helpful as Danli, it was surpassed by his shyness. During the day he'd hide in a dark corner, hidden behind a barrel, sleeping invisibly until the sun went down and Daniel stopped grinding for the day.  Then and only then would Danli sneak out to perform his chores.
  
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However, something seems wrong lately.  There's less and less grain coming in, which means less and less milling to be done, and the mice that formerly plagued the stores have been dwindling, replaced by vicious rats.  Somethings wrong, and Danli's worried.  He's sent out messages to other nearby faery's, and waits for news.  When it comes, he's sure he'll know what to do.  Until then, he sweeps the little dust that's been accumulating, and tries to keep the rats out of the remaining grain.  But mostly, he hopes and waits.
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However, something seems wrong lately.  There's less and less grain coming in, which means less and less milling to be done, and the mice that formerly plagued the stores have been dwindling, replaced by vicious rats.  Somethings wrong, and Danli's worried.  He's sent out messages to other nearby faery's, and waits for news.  When it comes, he's sure he'll know what to do.  Until then, he waits.
  
 
Mighty useful. Make no mskitae, I appreciate it.
 
Mighty useful. Make no mskitae, I appreciate it.

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