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The ship was at various times a merchant transport, a slave-ship, a privateer, and an outright band of pirates – things depended on where they were, the opportunities available, and the changing political and economic climate.  She became more skilled in fighting, but also in smooth-talking their way out of situations.  Her days as part of Makkahn’s crew were hard, but rewarding in many ways.  She learned much of the other cultures of the Lands of the Black Sea – Jhonian Merchants, the tribal cultures of the Forbidden Isles, the strange Kingdoms of the Athernian peninsula, and the complex web of political structures that formed the Islands of the Sea Princes.
 
The ship was at various times a merchant transport, a slave-ship, a privateer, and an outright band of pirates – things depended on where they were, the opportunities available, and the changing political and economic climate.  She became more skilled in fighting, but also in smooth-talking their way out of situations.  Her days as part of Makkahn’s crew were hard, but rewarding in many ways.  She learned much of the other cultures of the Lands of the Black Sea – Jhonian Merchants, the tribal cultures of the Forbidden Isles, the strange Kingdoms of the Athernian peninsula, and the complex web of political structures that formed the Islands of the Sea Princes.
  
They ranged far and wide, and enjoyed their share of adventure, as well as collecting riches on the way.  She was satisfied, and felt accepted amongst M’akkahns crew as an equal.  <span style="color: red;"> There was Jamshid Al-Masi, who came from the strip of land between Issyria and Jhon – the mountains called the Serpents Teeth.  A practical joker with a sly sense of humor when the crew was at ease, he transformed into a deadly swordsman during their raids.  And Ngozi, a huge bear of a Ugarian man, originally from the dense jungles of the Forbidden Isles.  Normally quiet, he was a powerful warrior in battle; but during during bouts of calm winds or other boring periods at sea, he also was a gifted storyteller, entrancing the entire crew with fables of his homeland and its heros.  She learned of the strange land of Usohaan where Randeep hailed from, across the mountains from Jhon and Issyria, who told stories of the creatures called el-Afants, as large as a house, that were ridden like horses into battle there.  And so many others who opened her eyes to the wider world she was now part of. </span>
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They ranged far and wide, and enjoyed their share of adventure, as well as collecting riches on the way.  She was satisfied, and felt accepted amongst M’akkahns crew as an equal.  There was Jamshid Al-Masi, who came from the strip of land between Issyria and Jhon – the mountains called the Serpents Teeth.  A practical joker with a sly sense of humor when the crew was at ease, he transformed into a deadly swordsman during their raids.  And Ngozi, a huge bear of a Ugarian man, originally from the dense jungles of the Forbidden Isles.  Normally quiet, he was a powerful warrior in battle; but during during bouts of calm winds or other boring periods at sea, he also was a gifted storyteller, entrancing the entire crew with fables of his homeland and its heros.  She learned of the strange land of Usohaan where Randeep hailed from, across the mountains from Jhon and Issyria, who told stories of the creatures called el-Afants, as large as a house, that were ridden like horses into battle there.  And so many others who opened her eyes to the wider world she was now part of.
  
 
It was one of the best times of her life.   
 
It was one of the best times of her life.   
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They were brought aboard the enemy ship, and got to see their holds emptied and brought aboard before the Ma’at Mna’al-i was set afire and burned.  They were made to kneel before the captain of the enemy vessel – an older man, tall, and lean.  His dirty-grey hair was worn long, greasy and unkempt under a broad-brimmed sailor’s hat.  He had a full beard and moustache, and his skin was deeply tanned and wrinkled.  He walked with a limp, favoring his right leg, and leaned on an ornately carved wooden cane, the grip of which was brass and shaped into the form of a fish with a gaping mouth.  A curved cutlass hung in a scabbard from his belt, and several daggers were stuck into his clothes.  He wore a huge black oilcloth coat over everything.
 
They were brought aboard the enemy ship, and got to see their holds emptied and brought aboard before the Ma’at Mna’al-i was set afire and burned.  They were made to kneel before the captain of the enemy vessel – an older man, tall, and lean.  His dirty-grey hair was worn long, greasy and unkempt under a broad-brimmed sailor’s hat.  He had a full beard and moustache, and his skin was deeply tanned and wrinkled.  He walked with a limp, favoring his right leg, and leaned on an ornately carved wooden cane, the grip of which was brass and shaped into the form of a fish with a gaping mouth.  A curved cutlass hung in a scabbard from his belt, and several daggers were stuck into his clothes.  He wore a huge black oilcloth coat over everything.
  
He looked each one over, after which there was either a nod, and the person was bound in chains, or a shake of his head – in which case, the crew slit the person’s throat, and they were thrown overboard.  Serela watched too many of her former crew killed this way, <span style="color: red;"> including  poor Randeep </span>.  Despite herself, she was shaking when it was her turn.  She almost didn’t notice the nod, after which the chains were clapped on her.
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He looked each one over, after which there was either a nod, and the person was bound in chains, or a shake of his head – in which case, the crew slit the person’s throat, and they were thrown overboard.  Serela watched too many of her former crew killed this way, including  poor Randeep.  Despite herself, she was shaking when it was her turn.  She almost didn’t notice the nod, after which the chains were clapped on her.
  
 
M’akkhan was the last person.  The enemy captain had him lifted to his feet, and then walked around him, inspecting.  He took M’akkhan’s whip, making a joke in some language Serela did not know that caused much laughter amongst the crew.  Then he gave orders, and M’akkhan was hauled up the mainmast, to the very top crossbar, where they proceeded to bind him, his arms outstretched, his legs down.
 
M’akkhan was the last person.  The enemy captain had him lifted to his feet, and then walked around him, inspecting.  He took M’akkhan’s whip, making a joke in some language Serela did not know that caused much laughter amongst the crew.  Then he gave orders, and M’akkhan was hauled up the mainmast, to the very top crossbar, where they proceeded to bind him, his arms outstretched, his legs down.
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The captain who had taken them captive was talking on the pier with another man – short, stout, powerfully built with broad shoulders and a huge chest.  The short man was possibly in the same age range as the captain, but looked far more hale and hearty.  The short man squinted under bushy red eyebrows, his head shaved clean, sporting a full beard and moustache also bright red.  The short man called the Captain by a name – Avoss Marghalla – while the captain addressed the short man as Sneer.  She saw money exchanged, and soon enough they were all led to a small wooden building where they were locked inside behind wooden gates.
 
The captain who had taken them captive was talking on the pier with another man – short, stout, powerfully built with broad shoulders and a huge chest.  The short man was possibly in the same age range as the captain, but looked far more hale and hearty.  The short man squinted under bushy red eyebrows, his head shaved clean, sporting a full beard and moustache also bright red.  The short man called the Captain by a name – Avoss Marghalla – while the captain addressed the short man as Sneer.  She saw money exchanged, and soon enough they were all led to a small wooden building where they were locked inside behind wooden gates.
  
<span style="color: red;"> In a few days, the dozen or so remaining crew members – including Ngozi and Jamshid, who had managed to survive – were sold, most in one sale to a large group of huge, hairy humanoids, she noticed.  </span> She never saw any of them again.
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In a few days, the dozen or so remaining crew members – including Ngozi and Jamshid, who had managed to survive – were sold, most in one sale to a large group of huge, hairy humanoids, she noticed.  She never saw any of them again.
  
 
But no one purchased her.  Eventually, she was alone in the prison.
 
But no one purchased her.  Eventually, she was alone in the prison.

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