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'''High concept:''' ''"Bionic Biker"'' | '''High concept:''' ''"Bionic Biker"'' | ||
− | '''Trouble:''' ''" | + | '''Trouble:''' ''"Errant Ways"'' |
− | '''Aspects:''' | + | '''Aspects:''' ''"Punches over Proverbs"'' ''"2 2 2 2 "'' ''"3 3 3 3 "'' |
'''Roles:''' ''Brawler, Wheelman, Bionic Soldier (Gonzo) | '''Roles:''' ''Brawler, Wheelman, Bionic Soldier (Gonzo) | ||
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'''Sweet Ride''' (Wheelman) | '''Sweet Ride''' (Wheelman) | ||
− | *''Z's bike, | + | *''Z's bike, the Destrier, is a massive hog. Its heavy, and packs a powerful engine... making it extremely fast. Anyone who drives it gets +1 to any rolls made to operate it. Once per episode, Z can spend a fate point to give his vehicle a third aspect with one free invocation that lasts until the end of the scene. This new aspect represents some hidden feature of the vehicle that hadn’t been revealed before. '' |
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==Story== | ==Story== | ||
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'''Compel:''' ''to have the cops go after him like he was a common criminal biker, to have the government look for him to retrieve their 'merchandise' to have his bionics short out or overload at a crucial moment.'' | '''Compel:''' ''to have the cops go after him like he was a common criminal biker, to have the government look for him to retrieve their 'merchandise' to have his bionics short out or overload at a crucial moment.'' | ||
− | ===Trouble=== | + | ===Rising Conflict=== |
+ | '''Trouble:''' ''Errant Ways'' | ||
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+ | Z likes to think of himself as a Big Damn Hero. He rarely misses the opportunity to help people in danger. This has gotten him in trouble on multiple occassions. He found a home with the Knights Errant who shared a similar code... they wouldn't stand by and let the gangs ruin the city. They even wore white leather vests with red markings to stand out... those this make sit easy for the gangs to single them out. | ||
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+ | '''Invoke:''' ''For a social bonus in areas where the Knights reputation is good, to call upon the other Knights for aid.'' | ||
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+ | '''Compel:''' ''to have him get in over his head while trying to help people, to have the gangs recognize him and come after him.'' | ||
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+ | ===Phase One=== | ||
'''Aspect:''' ''Punches over Proverbs'' | '''Aspect:''' ''Punches over Proverbs'' | ||
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'''Compel:''' To have Z's impatience get the better of him, or to have his lack of philosophical knowledge hinder him. | '''Compel:''' To have Z's impatience get the better of him, or to have his lack of philosophical knowledge hinder him. | ||
− | === | + | ===Phase Two=== |
− | '''Aspect:''' '' | + | '''Aspect:''' ''????'' |
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− | ''' | + | I can see Z trying to stop Nikki because he thinks she's just another criminal (drug running?) racer. (maybe because of the car she drives?) It sounds like racing is one of Nikki's big things, so I can see her getting away, but Z catching up with her when she's out of her vehicle later on. A minor conflict ensues, and Z realizes she's not a criminal... other than breaking speed limits... so she's not really the type he's after. |
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− | + | Maybe she even volunteers to put her pink slip up on a race to lure out the street racer he's really after? | |
− | + | Maybe he caught her trying to steal his car/cycle/ride but she managed to give him the slip. Later, one of the trainers at the school say, "Z, have you met our newest member? Meet Nikki Montoya..." | |
− | + | I kind of like it... Z was in the middle of something important, but somebody tries stealing his bike. A street race ensues, but in the process she wrecks his bike and gets away. | |
− | + | We meet at the school... (which is probably when Z returned to the school after being gone for a few years) and after a tense confrontation she ends up being his getaway driver for whatever trouble he was already embroiled in. | |
'''Invoke:''' asdfasdf | '''Invoke:''' asdfasdf | ||
'''Compel:''' aasdf asdf | '''Compel:''' aasdf asdf | ||
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'''Aspect''' ''Something else...'' | '''Aspect''' ''Something else...'' | ||