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[For simplicity's sake, I'm going to separate this into three sub-conversations for ease of response]
 
[For simplicity's sake, I'm going to separate this into three sub-conversations for ease of response]
  
==== The Rescue/Family ====
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=== The Rescue/Family ===
  
 
"If we are to speak, let us speak in the open air; not too high, of course, but the sunset should be beautiful just above the trees."
 
"If we are to speak, let us speak in the open air; not too high, of course, but the sunset should be beautiful just above the trees."
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"Thank you for your kindness, Eranon; I expected none, and a gift unlooked for is one best-loved."
 
"Thank you for your kindness, Eranon; I expected none, and a gift unlooked for is one best-loved."
  
"It was my great pleasure and privilage to aid your sister and her companions, and though I appreciate your gratitude no thanks is needed; it brings joy to my heart to see you and she reunited and happy, and that is enough. Family, though rarely perfect, is one of life's most profound blessings, and to share that blesing is an honour."
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"It was my great pleasure and privilage to aid your sister and her companions, and though I appreciate your gratitude no thanks is needed; it brings joy to my heart to see you and she reunited and happy, and that is enough. Family, though rarely perfect, is truly one of the most profound blessings in life, and to share that gift is an honour, and greatly pleases the Sorshef."
  
 
''*looking hesitant, he continues*''  
 
''*looking hesitant, he continues*''  
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"But enough of my complaining! We are bringing you and your sister home, and to see the joy of a dear friend is almost as sweet as one's own! I hope our sojurn into the great Erathor will be pleasing to you, and educational for me, as I know naught but rumors of the elf-woods, and they carry a grim and fearsome reputation in Sarcosan history; a reputation I hope proves gravely inaccurate."
 
"But enough of my complaining! We are bringing you and your sister home, and to see the joy of a dear friend is almost as sweet as one's own! I hope our sojurn into the great Erathor will be pleasing to you, and educational for me, as I know naught but rumors of the elf-woods, and they carry a grim and fearsome reputation in Sarcosan history; a reputation I hope proves gravely inaccurate."
  
==== Belal ====
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=== Belal ===
  
 
''*Turning to less pleasant subjects, Zal'Kazzir's tone becomes more taciturn*''
 
''*Turning to less pleasant subjects, Zal'Kazzir's tone becomes more taciturn*''
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==== Lady Ahimia ====
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=== Lady Ahimia ===
  
 
''*Zal'Kazzir's eyes darken, or seem to, as his face goes from stern to
 
''*Zal'Kazzir's eyes darken, or seem to, as his face goes from stern to

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