Editing Mythic Fate JRPG/Benjamin Wade Luther III

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So Benjamin hurriedly woke his children, and told them to pack a few things as they were going to stay at Gelma's house down the road for a few days while he had to handle a few things in town.  
 
So Benjamin hurriedly woke his children, and told them to pack a few things as they were going to stay at Gelma's house down the road for a few days while he had to handle a few things in town.  
  
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Benjamin rode hard and fast, finally arriving in Saiden a few days later at around midnight, and was careful that he wasn't being followed. He woke Kyran up at his home and informed him of the two gentlemen, possibly Kitsune, who wanted his brother dead for reasons unknown to him, and that they were up to something, as he thinks that they were poisoning the well too.
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Benjamin rode hard and fast, finally arriving in Saiden at around midnight, and was careful that he wasn't being followed. He woke Kyran up at his home and informed him of the two gentlemen, possibly Kitsune, who wanted his brother dead for reasons unknown to him, and that they were up to something, as he thinks that they were poisoning the well too.
  
 
" I don't know what's going on around here, but I don't like it," Benjamin grumbled to Kyran. He let his axe slide out from under his heavy coat. " I'm here to help you old friend, in any way I can".
 
" I don't know what's going on around here, but I don't like it," Benjamin grumbled to Kyran. He let his axe slide out from under his heavy coat. " I'm here to help you old friend, in any way I can".

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