Editing Paradise City:Dave Kline Got Murdered

Jump to: navigation, search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision Your text
Line 1,041: Line 1,041:
 
Vicki speaks to the captain through his vault-like door and he is, indeed, paranoid, asking if she works for the government. Vicki, thinking the joeboy might be scoping the place, or might even be the psycho himself, snaps a picture of him with her mobile phone's camera. Enraged, the joeboy storms towards her, demanding she hand over her phone. Upon her refusal he draws his gun. She, in turn, draws hers and a gunfight starts. Despite several close range shots the joeboy does not go down. The captain then opens his door, armed with a rifle. Vicki manages to grab his arm and get them both into the building, closing and locking the door behind her. The joeboy futilely hammers at the door. Katherine hearing the gunshots, drives as quickly as she safely can to the alley and parks. By the time she gets there the only thing she can see is the joeboy hammering on the door. Thinking that he is the psycho she aims and fires, but misses. She drives quickly ahead, past the alley, and parking on the corner, waiting for the joeboy to come around it so she can ambush him. Nothing happens. Meanwhile, in a desperate fight, Vicki severs one of the captain's arms and then contacts Katherine for help, having failed to stem the bleeding. Katherine, having discovered the joeboy had fled, does indeed help, taking a skin scraping in the process, and, after feeding the captain's dog, and dropped Vicki off at her place to wash up, she takes the captain to the nearest hospital, The United Foods Company of America Charitable Hospital, having already alerted the rest of the team to what happened and arranging to meet them there.
 
Vicki speaks to the captain through his vault-like door and he is, indeed, paranoid, asking if she works for the government. Vicki, thinking the joeboy might be scoping the place, or might even be the psycho himself, snaps a picture of him with her mobile phone's camera. Enraged, the joeboy storms towards her, demanding she hand over her phone. Upon her refusal he draws his gun. She, in turn, draws hers and a gunfight starts. Despite several close range shots the joeboy does not go down. The captain then opens his door, armed with a rifle. Vicki manages to grab his arm and get them both into the building, closing and locking the door behind her. The joeboy futilely hammers at the door. Katherine hearing the gunshots, drives as quickly as she safely can to the alley and parks. By the time she gets there the only thing she can see is the joeboy hammering on the door. Thinking that he is the psycho she aims and fires, but misses. She drives quickly ahead, past the alley, and parking on the corner, waiting for the joeboy to come around it so she can ambush him. Nothing happens. Meanwhile, in a desperate fight, Vicki severs one of the captain's arms and then contacts Katherine for help, having failed to stem the bleeding. Katherine, having discovered the joeboy had fled, does indeed help, taking a skin scraping in the process, and, after feeding the captain's dog, and dropped Vicki off at her place to wash up, she takes the captain to the nearest hospital, The United Foods Company of America Charitable Hospital, having already alerted the rest of the team to what happened and arranging to meet them there.
  
Allen and Anvil drive to the Justice Complex. Allen enters the building and proceeds with the process of registering his front company (Consolidated Secure Solutions, Incorporated), putting each of the team members in the records as employees. He also gets maps of the areas where each of the potential targets lives. Having done this, the two of them drive to the Midtown area where they have no problem getting all their electronic gear, and then they pick up another new team members, Lars Blackpool, hired earlier that day by Jenny. The three of them then go to the Downtown area and a shop called 4Warned & 4Armed were they buy their armour and weapons. They then return to Jacob's place where Anvil and Allen brief Lars about the job they've been hired to do. They soon get a phone call from Katherine letting them know that Vicki is in trouble. Despite the fact that it will take an hour for them to get there, they hop in Allen's car and drive up to Church Hill, arriving at the The United Foods Company of America Charitable Hospital.
+
Allen and Anvil drive to the Justice Complex. Allen enters the building and proceeds with the process of registering his front company (Consolidated Secure Solutions, Incorporated), putting each of the team members in the records as employees. He also gets maps of the areas where each of the potential targets lives. Having down this, the two of them drive to the Midtown area where they have no problem getting all their electronic gear, and then they pick up another new team members, Lars Blackpool, hired earlier that day by Jenny. The three of them then go to the Downtown area and a shop called 4Warned & 4Armed were they buy their armour and weapons. They then return to Jacob's place where Anvil and Allen brief Lars about the job they've been hired to do. They soon get a phone call from Katherine letting them know that Vicki is in trouble. Despite the fact that it will take an hour for them to get there, they hop in Allen's car and drive up to Church Hill, arriving at the The United Foods Company of America Charitable Hospital.
  
 
Jacob, using his computer expertise, pulls information for each of the remaining (live) people on the list, and gets a photograph of each of them. They are Angela Starsky, Victor Lebedev, William Price, Del Kim, and Captain Philip Abu-Assad. After sending the pictures to the team he also digs into their credit histories and reports. Noting that Captain Philip Abu-Assad has bought a lot of weapons and armour and is wanted by several credit card companies (with a $10,000 reward for information leading to his arrest), he lets Katherine know this.
 
Jacob, using his computer expertise, pulls information for each of the remaining (live) people on the list, and gets a photograph of each of them. They are Angela Starsky, Victor Lebedev, William Price, Del Kim, and Captain Philip Abu-Assad. After sending the pictures to the team he also digs into their credit histories and reports. Noting that Captain Philip Abu-Assad has bought a lot of weapons and armour and is wanted by several credit card companies (with a $10,000 reward for information leading to his arrest), he lets Katherine know this.

Please note that all contributions to RPGnet may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource (see RPGnet:Copyrights for details). Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)