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| | So this is Livewire's spotlight episode, in which he deals with his Issue of proving himself. BlackSheep has suggested a general plot outline, which I like, in the OOC thread, and I think the fallout from last episode's accusations should be part of the proving thing as well, although Joe plays a much smaller role here. I just thought I'd open this page for general thoughts and suggestions about the episode, including suggestions for a title. -- [[User:James Holloway|James Holloway]] 07:58, 16 December 2005 (PST) | | So this is Livewire's spotlight episode, in which he deals with his Issue of proving himself. BlackSheep has suggested a general plot outline, which I like, in the OOC thread, and I think the fallout from last episode's accusations should be part of the proving thing as well, although Joe plays a much smaller role here. I just thought I'd open this page for general thoughts and suggestions about the episode, including suggestions for a title. -- [[User:James Holloway|James Holloway]] 07:58, 16 December 2005 (PST) |
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| − | My thought for a title was Sins of the Father. But other suggestions would be welcome. [[User:BlackSheep|BlackSheep]] 09:08, 16 December 2005 (PST)
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| − | We seem to be in agreement that we shouldn't pre-play the episode, so other than the title thing (I like the title ... my suggestion was going to be "Your Mum and Dad," but the reference is probably a little too obscure and British) this is going to be the page for kibbitzing scene one when we find out what it is. -- [[User:James Holloway|James Holloway]] 12:01, 16 December 2005 (PST)
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| − | Draft for tying up the current scene. [[User:BlackSheep|BlackSheep]] 12:28, 21 December 2005 (PST)
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| − | PRINCIPAL: Anyway, it's been a pleasure talking to you, Mister Morris, and I hope to see you again soon.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Oh, you will.
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| − | PRINCIPAL: Right now, though, we really must be going.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Let me get my coat and I'll walk you down. I need to pick up some groceries. Joel, I'm sure you have some studying to do...
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| − | JOEL: Actually, sir, could I have a quick word before you go?
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Of course.
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| − | PRINCIPAL: We'll wait in the hall.
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| − | Once the door shuts, Joel rounds on Gunslinger angrily.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Nice people.
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| − | JOEL: Drop the act. I want to know what you're up to.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: I'm sure you do. Unfortunately, one of the things you'll learn as you get older is that we don't always get what we want.
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| − | JOEL: Listen, you-
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| − | GUNSLINGER: No, [i]you[/i] listen to [i]me[/i].
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| − | Suddenly the pleasant demeanour is gone. His voice is quiet but cold.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: You ruined my life, you little brat. Give me a reason, and I can ruin yours. Do you want everyone to know who you are? Where you live? Who you hang out with?
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| − | JOEL: ...no.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Then you don't get to make demands of me. Now get out of my way.
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| − | Joel keeps his gaze steady for a long moment, then breaks and steps aside.
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| − | GUNSLINGER: Good boy.
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| − | Coat over his arm, he walks out. Joel closes and bolts the door, then leans back on it, fists clenched helplessly.
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