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'''Age:''' 17<br>
 
'''Age:''' 17<br>
  
'''Appearance:''' Setsuna is a tall, thin girl with sleepy brown eyes, fair complexion, and shoulder length light brown hair that is always messy. Not wasting time with your hair means more time to sleep in. Constant overuse of her power has triggered several permanent changes. Her hair has changed color to a violent shade of red that writhes angrily, and a cavernous maw lined with rows of razor sharp teeth has appeared on her stomach<br>
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'''Appearance:''' Setsuna is a tall, thin girl with sleepy brown eyes, fair complexion, and shoulder length light brown hair that is always messy. Not wasting time with your hair means more time to sleep in. Constant overuse of her power has triggered several permanent changes. Her hair has changed color to a violent shade of red that writhes angrily. A cavernous maw lined with rows of razor sharp teeth has appeared on her stomach<br>
  
 
'''Magical Girl Appearance:''' Setsuna's transformation breaks the shackles of fear and helplessness that bind her heart, unleashing a warrior's spirit. Her outfit reflects this change and gives her the appearance of a fierce Oni. With black iron gauntlets and boots, a long tattered dress, chest wrap, and Tiger skins. When Setsuna sets out to harass the Yakuza clans she leaves the tiger skins behind and dons a cheap coat and gaudy oni mask she picked up in the shopping district to try and hide her identity.<br>
 
'''Magical Girl Appearance:''' Setsuna's transformation breaks the shackles of fear and helplessness that bind her heart, unleashing a warrior's spirit. Her outfit reflects this change and gives her the appearance of a fierce Oni. With black iron gauntlets and boots, a long tattered dress, chest wrap, and Tiger skins. When Setsuna sets out to harass the Yakuza clans she leaves the tiger skins behind and dons a cheap coat and gaudy oni mask she picked up in the shopping district to try and hide her identity.<br>

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