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While Mr Zedlai was a great businessman, he was not a good father. He barely ever met with his own son, and he barely showed a hint of affection to the boy. Eventually, young Xaven realized his father came to see him more when he did something wrong. Thus, he did more and more wrong, broke more and more rules, all in an attempt to get his father’s attention. But not too long ago he went too far. He fought his way up to the top of the highest tower on Vanaar and jumped off. He survived the fall thanks to his body, but even his father’s prestige couldn’t keep him out of trouble. But then the producers for SHR approached him, offered him a slot on their next season. How could he refuse an offer to get on galactic television? | While Mr Zedlai was a great businessman, he was not a good father. He barely ever met with his own son, and he barely showed a hint of affection to the boy. Eventually, young Xaven realized his father came to see him more when he did something wrong. Thus, he did more and more wrong, broke more and more rules, all in an attempt to get his father’s attention. But not too long ago he went too far. He fought his way up to the top of the highest tower on Vanaar and jumped off. He survived the fall thanks to his body, but even his father’s prestige couldn’t keep him out of trouble. But then the producers for SHR approached him, offered him a slot on their next season. How could he refuse an offer to get on galactic television? | ||
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Liquid metal in the form of a man, the specifics of Xaven’s form are constantly shifting. Thus, a more elaborate description would be rather useless. The only constant are the glittering eyes set in his nearly-blank face. | Liquid metal in the form of a man, the specifics of Xaven’s form are constantly shifting. Thus, a more elaborate description would be rather useless. The only constant are the glittering eyes set in his nearly-blank face. | ||
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Xaven is nothing if not a showman. If all eyes are not on him, he obviously isn’t trying hard enough. Granted, this means he’ll probably die young and leave a beautiful puddle when he jumps into a spotlight he shouldn’t have. That’s probably why the producers chose him, along with his flashy power set. But beneath all the flash, there’s just a young boy in desperate need of his father’s approval. | Xaven is nothing if not a showman. If all eyes are not on him, he obviously isn’t trying hard enough. Granted, this means he’ll probably die young and leave a beautiful puddle when he jumps into a spotlight he shouldn’t have. That’s probably why the producers chose him, along with his flashy power set. But beneath all the flash, there’s just a young boy in desperate need of his father’s approval. | ||